Reviews for A Special Task
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2019
Your timeline has plot holes.
2089 - Mass relays moved to extra dimensional space
2146 - Blood pack controlled frigate fleeing form sanitarians enters Sol system.
- Your saying that 57 years later the HEART of human territory was not secured?
You'll have to explain that the Blood Pack used their ships FTL to travel from the next closest system to Sol.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2019
I find it strange that we just dpfired in a ufo without trying to find out what it was, or communicating with it, for seemingly no reason
Mercenary9814 chapter 26 . 12/20/2018
I have a good guess on what the Universe showed up in but I'm gonna withhold all comments until it's confirmed
Ilireanwri chapter 8 . 7/24/2018
The idea with the Vodka is interesting. I've never see that one in a fanfic before. It's a smart idea, but could possibly have some serious and lasting consequences (negative relations) with people who don't take being tricked well...
Nemo Blank chapter 26 . 7/2/2018
Too much too fast. You wanted to write about humans kicking azz, which you did magnificently, and now you're out of plot. I doubt if you can credibly go anywhere from this outline. You should probably either tack on a 'The End,' or break the last few chapters up and write the parts that should fit in between A and K.
amerdism chapter 26 . 6/16/2018
Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon.
Guahanboy98 chapter 26 . 4/16/2018
I hope you come back to this story soon. I really like this one along side your Agent Orimura story.
Guest chapter 26 . 4/1/2018
4 years :( and nothing I'm sad know
erisol chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
Good first chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2018
If an Alien craft came to Earth like that shooting it down/ trying to shoot it down seems like such a bad idea, If they have the technology to fly to our planet we have no way to defend ourselves. They would have instantaneous orbital supremacy and a world full of targets.
Yankee718 chapter 11 . 10/18/2017
Really liked this chapter it was entertaining for me
dragonnargus chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
This story seem like one of those "human fuck yeah" stories. Not that I dislike them of course, but I just wish that the councilers would show more...skills...In negotiation and politicking. As it is, it seem to me like they just agree to whatever humans throw at them. And accepting alcohol of unknown strength right before negotiation also show their lacks odd any form of skills any politicians should have.
Chris Adair chapter 26 . 9/27/2017
Good story. Hope you come back to it.
Reichenfaust chapter 22 . 7/13/2017
shadow chapter 26 . 7/6/2017
I liked the chapter!
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