Reviews for The grey protocol
Ilamay chapter 5 . 7/17
Love it. Looking forward to more. And glad you are feeling and doing better. )
Guest chapter 2 . 11/21/2017
lovely encounter with harry and draco in the corridor.
xd chapter 2 . 9/5/2017
this deserves a hard xd
Shadow's blood 3288 chapter 4 . 6/19/2017
On the contrary.
mandancie chapter 4 . 4/14/2017
I really hope that you come back to this story. if ever you want to talk, I'm willing an able to listen.
Dragonfan47 chapter 4 . 2/24/2016
Au contraire: on the contrary, the opposite.
PenguinGirl94 chapter 2 . 8/16/2015
Uh.. to be clear.. you plan to set up Fred/George romantically?! ...but their twins... :o Usually the "/" between names is a romantic pair, if thats the case, I don't mind the rest.. but the twins are BROTHERS.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
Au contrar ruffly translates to just the opposite

Born and raised French so if you have any other translation questions shot me an email
arvora chapter 4 . 6/20/2015
Yeah, ther is :
On the contrary
daithi4377 chapter 4 . 6/19/2015
This story is more Draco oriented than Harry isn't it?
daithi4377 chapter 3 . 6/19/2015
I just figured the French is because the Malfoys were from France so they kept the language. Just how many are in the third party...looks like quite a few Slytherins.
daithi4377 chapter 2 . 6/19/2015
Very fast paced. How was Lucius and Narcissa able to handle the prophecy globe?
daithi4377 chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
So a third side...grey?
Minerva McG chapter 4 . 6/16/2015
the nearest equivalent phrase to 'au contraire' would be ' on the contrary'
Minerva McG chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
OK - here starts your lesson in English grammar & syntax.
Line 6 - 'indicated for' would be better
Line 12 - better paraphrsing would be 'After hearing this; Draco, annoyed stood up abruptly ...
Line 15 - the word you need is dead not death "I'll just end up dead"
Line 16 - on not in "Do you even know on which side you'll fight"
Line 17 - mixing the tenses up so either " I'll only badmouth ... " or "I've only badmouthed ..."

Overall an interesting start - I liked it.
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