Reviews for The Pokémon Master's Journey: The Journey Begins
Conan.212 chapter 1 . 8/25/2018
Ok the part with Pikachu was really to fast and easy and that makes it boring.
Codie - King of Hollows chapter 11 . 7/29/2018
when Ash's Eevee first hatched you said it was female. You changed it to male in later chapters. Why exactly?
Codie - King of Hollows chapter 6 . 7/29/2018
i've noticed some spelling mistakes in this and the last chapter namely in regards to a certain Dragon-Type Pokemon. It's not spelled "R-A-Q-U-A-Z-A" it's actually "R-A-Y-Q-U-A-Z-A". You were just missing that ONE letter. Other than than I'm enjoying this story IMMENSELY.
bdogrulz chapter 3 . 7/7/2018
I really dont understand how a thunder shock can be turned into an iron tail like that it's really confusing and almost seems half assed. but still decent story
kagehinaotp chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
Uh, you realize that if Delia is 29, then she had Ash at 19, right? That's not really common and is dangerous for women to have children under 20 because their hips aren't developed well enough for children. So, it's almost impossible for Delia to have a child at 19 cause she should've known the risks. Please think before you write. I always peeves me when someone doesn't use logic.
Guest chapter 51 . 6/6/2018
Leaf seems a massive marysue
DragonEmperor999 chapter 36 . 5/24/2018
What a chapter
DragonEmperor999 chapter 35 . 5/24/2018
MEWTWO
DragonEmperor999 chapter 34 . 5/24/2018
Little Mermaid
DragonEmperor999 chapter 33 . 5/24/2018
Great Family Reunion
DragonEmperor999 chapter 32 . 5/23/2018
Hope Mew keeps his promise
DragonEmperor999 chapter 31 . 5/23/2018
New Power
DragonEmperor999 chapter 30 . 5/23/2018
The Legion?
DragonEmperor999 chapter 29 . 5/23/2018
Oh man crazy
DragonEmperor999 chapter 28 . 5/23/2018
Man Gary’s Electabuzz is grouchy
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