|Reviews for The Pokémon Master's Journey: The Journey Begins|
| timberwolfst chapter 19 . 2/6/2018
Hmmm... That's not how I understand Eevee evolution to work. There's the five stones, and 3 natural evolutions that only take place with a high friendship level. During the day it will become an Espeon, at night an Umbreon, but it only becomes a Sylveon if it has learned a Fairy type move. If it knows a Fairy move it becomes a Sylveon regardless of the time of day.
| timberwolfst chapter 17 . 2/6/2018
Ewww... Gary has an Umbreon! Make it an Espion (not possible since it's night time) or a Sylveon! (Yes I know the story is already complete so this does no good. I'm just expressing my disappointment if it's an Umbreon. Best that can be said for it is that it's not a stone evolution. I say "it" because in chapter 3 it hatched as female, but by chapter 10 it had become male)
| Guest chapter 53 . 1/29/2018
Hey what's this you wrote that ash charizard is way stronger than normal charizard u also wrote when they bonded together by their aura on that volcano battle and now you ended just like that just because of mega evolution... You could have atleast made the battle a little longer... It ended way to easily
| eli12jahri22veragmail.com chapter 10 . 1/18/2018
one of his pokeballs exploded...he died from the explosion shortly after while brock and misty fatally injured and his pokemon severly wounded
| AnthroDragon chapter 15 . 1/10/2018
Aside from the scar why did she glance at his thigh.
| nick chapter 52 . 1/5/2018
Sometime ago, you were saying that Jesse & James would get some Pokémon in this fanfic. The reason I asked about this was because I felt kind of sorry for those two, because they hardly catch any Pokémon. So I'm thinking that you have plans for which Pokémon they will catch. If you can't say them now, you could at least say which one of the Pokémon they won't catch will be.
| Goldenyoshistar1 chapter 8 . 12/16/2017
I didn't notice this the first time I read this fanfiction, but Styles Glaceon is named Mizore... and his Pupitar is named Godzilla (makes Sense because Tyranitar looks like Godzilla.) Where you a fan of the anime Rosario and Vampire, and was your favorite character Mizore?
| thor94 chapter 52 . 12/14/2017
about mewtwo, hope ash will obtain the movie one.
| midnightscar17 chapter 24 . 12/8/2017
Wheres suicune and lugia especially lugia
| Phantomsoul2015 chapter 51 . 11/10/2017
Good arc overall
| Guest chapter 51 . 11/7/2017
Fox : Please put up a new chapter to inform when the new story is out. Can you please give Ash a Larvitar? Btw great end. Not at all cliché
| Guest chapter 51 . 11/4/2017
Love it! It would be great if misty doesnt go back to her gym in johto Im almost sure that brock is going to follow him like on the show, but it would be great to see misty besides the new companions that ash gets
| Pokemon fan chapter 51 . 11/4/2017
U definitely made a great story and enjoying the chapters I'm enjoying it and I'm thinking at some point when the time comes ash should ask misty out on a date I would love to see their friendship grow and grow till the point where there ready to admit there feelings and end up together as boyfriend and girlfriend keep up the good work and continue this wonderful fantastic story u made here it's very well written it's not perfect but I'm still enjoying it I just read each chapter without expectations so that way I can just have fun reading other stories such as this one then I would with expectons again you are doing a wonderful job definitely one of the best fanfics I read
| oddfather chapter 51 . 11/4/2017
Not the ending I was looking for but storys been well written regardless. Good job. Not a fan of z moves coming in the sequel but we'll see how it plays out
| dloold87 chapter 51 . 11/4/2017
Ash lost to fucking Leaf, who just happens to pull out Mega Evolution. If you wanted him to lose, at least have him lose to a actual real trainer, not someone like Leaf who is not even a real Pokemon character. Also what the fuck was with the team he chose? He seemed to have gotten dumb all the sudden, and lost all strategy and battle skill. Instead of picking his best team he seemed to have chosen a random team to lose with; instead of using Pikachu, Gyarados, Umbreon, Primeape, Charizard and Muk. If he had he would have easily won the match, even with having Leaf of all people pull Mega Evolution out of her ass. I love this story but come on, he lost like a bitch and is being a disappointment after being awesome.