Reviews for Hollywood
EeWee chapter 31 . 5h
OMG!What a fabulous story. I confess I started it last night and finished it today. I just couldn't stop reading! I love Olderward stories. I do hope you will write more outtakes. I always love a happy ending.
americannight99 chapter 1 . 8/12
I loved the story but just have to know do they make it? she go to jail or what? please just a little info
Kimmyle chapter 31 . 7/23
Hey I just have to say I loved your story. It was great to read with a lot of twists that came unexpected. It was well passed and easy and fun to read, though I would have loved to see if they make it in the end.
FoxyLoxy24 chapter 28 . 7/11
audy chapter 31 . 6/20
this is BEAUTIFULLY written! i love this fic even tho i had to put up with the dramas and im still not over the fact that edward just forgave her that easy
audy chapter 30 . 6/20
i must say; i am a little disappointed in the ending. i thought i'll get something better after all 30 chapters full of bella and her dramatic ass lmaooo but ok i'll take it
audy chapter 29 . 6/20
lmao bella (or marie?) is indeed a dramatic queen
audy chapter 18 . 6/20
i dont like this pushing situation. and bella WHAT IN THE GODDAMNED FUCK DID YOU EXACTLY TELL HIM? nothing. litwrally nothing omg
audy chapter 15 . 6/20
i am definitely taking my words back when i said i love this bella bc i clearly dont :/
audy chapter 12 . 6/19
YALL CAN IGNORE ME RIGHT AWAY BC YES ITS ABOUT BELLA AGAINã…¡ this bella is REALLY getting on my nerves like you want edward to ask and when he did you just.. cant? i mean i know your life is complicated or such but dont do thag dkdksk and yes i wanna say this she doesnt deserve edward. edward deserves so much better than her/her mother tbh. hell you can put a nice character here like mr. cabrera and i'd ship him with it
audy chapter 11 . 6/19
this bella doesnt even look like she's 16 (in my opinion) she acts so so much mature
audy chapter 10 . 6/19
bella really sounds like a spoiled rich brat lmao
audy chapter 9 . 6/19
to be honest this chapter made me dislike bella more. i mean she does these little things that just dont make sense. not answering people bc it feels like its better left hanging? teasing edward but sad that he said its inapproriate well then what do you want queen B
audy chapter 6 . 6/19
i kinda dont like this bella, she is so full of herself. so everytime it always has to be edward to greet and say hi first? why cant she do it herself? tsk
audy chapter 4 . 6/19
jsksks i love this bella omg i love this game LET THE SEDUCTION BEGIIIIINN
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