Reviews for Hollywood
NKubie chapter 13 . 8/2/2020
You're allowed artistic license with the legal stuff. Very few fiction movies/books/TV shows give an honest portrayal anyway.

I wonder if subconsciously Edward knew Bella kissed him. Hmmm.

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 12 . 8/2/2020
More playing with fire.

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 11 . 8/1/2020
Oh Edward, you really have no idea.

xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 10 . 8/1/2020
Both mother and daughter are very manipulative. Not that I didn't know that already, but still...

xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 9 . 8/1/2020
I know what it's like to miss your father. I feel for Bella.

xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 8 . 8/1/2020
Gah! I wish I was Audrey cool like that! And I can understand the dichotomy between wanting loving Alice and wanting her gone. It's tough to resolve.

xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 7 . 8/1/2020
I love Alice too!

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 6 . 8/1/2020
Playing with fire...

xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 5 . 8/1/2020
Really interesting dynamic between Bella and Renee. And I think Edward is starting to feel uncomfortably attracted to his girlfriend's daughter. Although she is just 16. ;)

xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 4 . 8/1/2020
I was NEVER that cool. Pity.

xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 3 . 8/1/2020
I looked up the dress. Beautiful, but very daring for a 16 year old. Then again, that's Bella, isn't it?
NKubie chapter 2 . 8/1/2020
I love that Edward sees through Renee's manipulation. At least some of it. I wonder how much of that is due to Bella's hints.

xo
Nan
NKubie chapter 1 . 8/1/2020
I think I sped through the first time I read this, so now I'm taking time to review. We've chosen this story to discuss in our Twific book club.

This is definitely not SM's Bella. I like her smoothness!

Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
rachel625 chapter 31 . 7/15/2020
Wow, very interesting story!
girlygirl0706 chapter 31 . 7/11/2020
Finally decided to read this after being in my follow list for such a long time. Loved, loved, loved this story from start to finish. Wish you could continue with the outtake/futuretakes. You left me wanting for more chapters...like when they arrive home, trial if there is one, Edward's family finding out about Bella and his relationship, etc...

Thanks for sharing for story with us.
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