Reviews for Hollywood
audy chapter 30 . 6/20/2018
i must say; i am a little disappointed in the ending. i thought i'll get something better after all 30 chapters full of bella and her dramatic ass lmaooo but ok i'll take it
audy chapter 29 . 6/20/2018
lmao bella (or marie?) is indeed a dramatic queen
audy chapter 18 . 6/20/2018
i dont like this pushing situation. and bella WHAT IN THE GODDAMNED FUCK DID YOU EXACTLY TELL HIM? nothing. litwrally nothing omg
audy chapter 15 . 6/20/2018
i am definitely taking my words back when i said i love this bella bc i clearly dont :/
audy chapter 12 . 6/19/2018
YALL CAN IGNORE ME RIGHT AWAY BC YES ITS ABOUT BELLA AGAINã…¡ this bella is REALLY getting on my nerves like you want edward to ask and when he did you just.. cant? i mean i know your life is complicated or such but dont do thag dkdksk and yes i wanna say this she doesnt deserve edward. edward deserves so much better than her/her mother tbh. hell you can put a nice character here like mr. cabrera and i'd ship him with it
audy chapter 11 . 6/19/2018
this bella doesnt even look like she's 16 (in my opinion) she acts so so much mature
audy chapter 10 . 6/19/2018
bella really sounds like a spoiled rich brat lmao
audy chapter 9 . 6/19/2018
to be honest this chapter made me dislike bella more. i mean she does these little things that just dont make sense. not answering people bc it feels like its better left hanging? teasing edward but sad that he said its inapproriate well then what do you want queen B
audy chapter 6 . 6/19/2018
i kinda dont like this bella, she is so full of herself. so everytime it always has to be edward to greet and say hi first? why cant she do it herself? tsk
audy chapter 4 . 6/19/2018
jsksks i love this bella omg i love this game LET THE SEDUCTION BEGIIIIINN
twilightobession chapter 31 . 5/25/2018
Thank you Thank you Thank you for this chapter. I am glad they are back together. You mentioned at the end of this chapter about an outtake between Bella and Renee. I hope you will post it. I know it's been a while since you've updated but I hope you will. I'm going to put this on alert just in case you do. Loved reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
twilightobession chapter 30 . 5/25/2018
Omgosh! Is that really the way you're going to end it?
twilightobession chapter 29 . 5/25/2018
Omgosh! So much information. Poor Edward.
twilightobession chapter 28 . 5/25/2018
WHAT!?
twilightobession chapter 27 . 5/24/2018
I hope Bella does stand up to her mother. Bella needs to live her own life. Not the life her mom wants.
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