Reviews for Daughter to King
Guest chapter 12 . 4/19/2017
I really love this!
I'm not imposing this but, for some reason, I can see Doflamingo doing 'Hellfire' because of Luffy and her power. That would be interesting to see.
A lot of suitors are going to be after Luffy from this point.
Ladyleo145 chapter 8 . 3/27/2017
okay, than thanks for writing these two books and regardless of anyone else I too hope you don't stop until there all completed. PS amazing work by the way
CrimGate chapter 17 . 2/8/2017
I know you hate hearing "please update soon!" So I won't say it. Instead I'll say "don't stop!" Your story is great and I love it. I know life is more important so I won't rush you. I can wait a long time for an update. Also I love that you value quality over quantity. I have noticed some plot holes or plot differences from this and the prequel "Daughter of the Sea" but other then that I'm happy reading your work. Keep it up! _
ScandinavianTrash chapter 17 . 1/22/2017
As long as you never abandon this fanfiction, i'm fine with the sporadic update rates and grammar/spelling problems.
SO, I WONDER HOW CROCUS, VIVI, AND LABOON WILL REACT :D
Avo385 chapter 12 . 10/16/2016
I'm surprised that you didn't have Bonney in this chapter. I get the feeling that at Sabaody there's going to be a trial against the tenryuubito.
CelestialPirateQueen chapter 17 . 10/7/2016
I read both stories (daughter to the seadaughter to king) ... I simply LOVE it! You thought of everything!, that was awesome! I just can't wait to see her swim in the grandline like it was nothing! And they didn't see the album yet,, i would love to see their reaction when they see a little luffy sleeping on whitebeard's or shanks's lap!
DragonClanMaster chapter 17 . 10/2/2016
First off, I won't correct your spelling and grammar. I suck at it just as bad if not worse.
This story has an interesting consent and you are doing a marvelous job of writing it even if it's a bit rough around the edges.
Now, since I normally just read all current chapters before reviewing, I would like to say something about an earlier chapter. It's nothing wrong, you just simply FRIED MY BRAIN WHEN YOU HAD LUFFY KISS MIHAWK! Ohmygosh! That was shocking, a complete twist, and the most hilarious moment of that chapter. XD
Besides that shock, yeah, Luffy was kinda Ooc during the Arlong Arc.
As for Dragon, that just made my head spin, but I'll wait for the story to sort that out.
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ErrorDataExpunged chapter 17 . 9/28/2016
If you're concerned with spelling and grammar Beta readers a thing, very helpful and even more helpful if they are actually interested in the story and understands the way characters in the story behave.
narutolover10110 chapter 17 . 9/24/2016
Love both your naruto story and this story :) can't wait to read more :) ps. Your an awesome artist :D quick question though, was sabo the one brother that "died"? In chapter 12 the one law and Kidd were talking/thinking about?
flee27 chapter 17 . 9/16/2016
i know how hard it is to try and keep a character true to the main principle of its true nature, if that made any sense. i am having a similar issue in one of my writings. but to have found and admitted your mistake and not thrown a fit at those who pointed it out is key to good writer and viewer relations. hopefully this was of help and hope to read more, i absolutely love your fics. :)
KeepHopeStayWhelmed chapter 17 . 9/16/2016
I don't think there is anything wrong with your Luffy! Considering the fact that this is an AU and that her and her brothers grew up in Whitebeards ship and she's a God and a girl, then I'd be upset if she wasn't different from canon Luffy. She grew up under different circumstances from canon Luffy so it makes sense that she isn't exactly the same since a persons environment and the people around them have an impact on their development. So no matter what anyone says it makes sense that she's ooc. And I really love your Luffy as she is so please don't change it.
P1R8 K1NG chapter 17 . 9/15/2016
I absolutely love ur writings so i don't think that u need to change anything. u are and outstanding writer and please continue to be one! Don't let others bring you down
jaminjess8 chapter 17 . 9/15/2016
I always love what you write so stop being so harsh with yourself! We're only human and we all make mistakes but in the end we are our own worst critics and trust me I am guilty of this as well. (Everyone is). Do whatever you feel is right but always know that I love your writing just the way you do it so don't change just because someone tells you to. (Not saying don't change or anything it's your choice). Just saying that follow what you believe, it's your story and only you can continue to make it awesome just like you always do. :D
Natsuyuuki chapter 17 . 9/15/2016
Actually I'm not mind if Luffy too OOC. This is means a lot to me (Well, not as much like you) and make me more... curious. I also love it because it's about Luffy Brothers and Familial (Like Whitebeard?) and Friendship. Well, if you not sure about garmmars and spelling, you can always ask someone to be your Beta Reader.
xXDia-RoseXx chapter 17 . 9/15/2016
As someone who's also writing a OP story I get where you're coming from. If we go too far from the original character we get screamed at for them being OOC but if we make them too much like the character we get screamed at for copying. Finding that delicate balance between them both is tiring and comes with trial and error. You're a great author and I enjoy this story. We all learn from one another and take feedback in different ways. I for one am afraid of harsh reviews and tend to hide from them as soon as I see them. I can only hope to one day be like you and take helpful criticism and roasting with grace :) I enjoyed the chapter you took down and am glad I got to read it, I can't wait for more! Keep up the great work and keep well. DR
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