|Reviews for On The Road To Discovery|
| caroldpb chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
You are a great writer, I really did enjoy that.
Hope you write more..
| Sonar chapter 1 . 4/6/2001
| Gabrielle chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Doyle's still gone in it, but for once I didn't cry. Felt a slight squench of a tear at the end, but it's okay. (Not that I don't like stories that make me cry.) This was good. The descriptions of the place were really good. (There's a repeated and misplaced paragraph in there you might want to check though). Good job.
| Kristy chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Hey, just a minor thing. You have Angel say "Merci Bixjoux". You mean "Merci Beacoup". Beacuop a lot Bijouxjewelry. By the by I really enjoyed the story! Thaks for sharing it!