Reviews for The Serpent Sorcerer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() es vergonzoso para mi admitir, que pensaba que Hidane era un error de escritura y hasta ahora me doy cuenta de que en realidad era una versión femenina de Hidan... |
![]() ![]() ![]() really love this story can't wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() What a mess, dropping this now before I commit myself to finish reading this trash |
![]() ![]() It was going doo, then you had a memory wipe and I lost all interest. Good luck and sayonara! |
![]() ![]() ![]() “It” is in fact a word you know. Reading The Replicator like 8 times in 3 sentences almost made me have an aneurysm |
![]() ![]() ![]() How would that confirm who the bot who lived is |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reads like an 8th grade history paper |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish this wasn't dead |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() Couple of minor errors but overall a wonderful story. The errors on Harry's/Kabuto's stats his max would be 40.5 hence minor error. And the other error I noticed was the killing curse successfully killed shino the living hive ... Unless you had him fake his death then the curse wouldn't have worked as the insects live inside of him crawl on him under his clothing and the curse is a 1 target spell. As such one of the bugs would have died but not shino. Besides that this has been one of the coolest crossovers I've read in decades |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw dangI thought since he'd summoned nagini before he'd remember her. I suppose not then |
![]() ![]() ![]() he's gonna end up with a spider girl. "wonder if I can clone blank?" means he's getting another lover lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too difficult to understand. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh? back to 3rd pov? I'm going to be much happier if it stays this way |
![]() ![]() ![]() im gonna assume that you were rewriting everything up to this point. because before this point it was 3rd pov with some 1st pov mistakes written in. now it's just straight 1st pov so I assume it was all originally 1st then got rewritten some and then you stopped editing it for some reason. I'll try and push through, 1st pov is just Self inserty |