Reviews for The Serpent Sorcerer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() when I started this story, I never expected it to go between all these universes. it works so dang well too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the fuck even is this trash? |
![]() ![]() ![]() they're, bruh. come on |
![]() ![]() ![]() As an English major, I must bring up what I keep seeing... There, instead of Their. Like bruh. That's the only thing I keep seeing it paying attention to, and it's killing me. Nice fic tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() More lemons for the lemon god! |
![]() ![]() ![]() IMHO, I think the fourth shinobi war is down the toilet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can only say if this novel wasnt a harem based novel, then this NOVEL probably would have been a masterpiece. Harry Potter a kid that can talk to snake, and is somehow related to snakes and his decision changes the world as a whole. Kabuto a kid who lost his memory and is searching for a place that accept him all his life and is one of the key player that lead to the 4th GNW. Both wear glasses, are related to snake, are talented and in a sense are one of the core of their story. I dont know if they are combined and with both the ability this story would have very few plotholes and massive potential as a whole. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked the story up until the last 2 chapters. they felt disjointed from the stories original actions with how kabuto would treat a situation, bringing a forced flavour to the text |
![]() ![]() ![]() alley is a side road while ally is a partner |
![]() ![]() You know, for some reason I’m more upset about Tsunade’s impending death than pretty much any of the other Naruto characters (though I mildly hoped Hinata would live but not that much). |
![]() ![]() It’s pretty funny that he created the replicators. Also, didn’t he have a ‘don’t attack unless attacked’ order? So, somebody must’ve attacked the replicators first lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just realized, but when Rock Lee introduces himself during the scene he ends up fighting Kimimaro (the scene that leads to Kimimaro’s death) you have him introduce himself as “The Leaf’s proud AZURE beast has reincarnated” when he is the second coming of the GREEN beast of Kanoha. Remember that their jumpsuits are that horrifyingly scaring shade of green |
![]() ![]() This is still pretty boring to read |
![]() ![]() This is boring bro |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would've been interesting to see Tsunade turn traitor for the chance to be young forever. |