Reviews for The Serpent Sorcerer |
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![]() ![]() Please update soon the things are getting hot and the battle are gonna be so cool so please post a little faster. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for giving us this story i love it however i am reviewing to ask u to up date it and to ask that u give kabuto the eternal sharingan and to suggest an option for the dragon task which is that u add it to the somoning contract after it's enslaved with the sharigan after all if madaras sharigan could enslave the kyuubi then who's to say that a regular or the second level could not enslave a mindless beast |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG SO COOL this is going to be awesome kabuto scaring and shocking the heck out of the wizarding world! Your are going to make this awesome right? :) |
![]() ![]() very good, loved |
![]() ![]() Please post the next soon will be so cool and when you will begin the harem list for the harryverse, because i would like to say my vote is for daphne greengrass , tracy davis or a female blaise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. Hope you'll keep updating!) And there are few mistakes, that are spread all over your story: Sense - Since . . . . . . . And I already forgot about another one... T_T |
![]() ![]() Simple EPIC he appears and show them the new pecking order ,awesome the style of the ninja, badass and the people know of naruto canon universe will be really intersting now so please keep posting more soon this chapter was am amazing return, best wishes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you want to continue this story after the end of the Harry Potter storyline, I would suggest sending them to the world of Final Fantasy XIII. I just really want to see someone with the Crystal Release bloodline in the world of FF13. The title of the FF13 series is Fabula Nova Crystallis, and crystals are really powerful in that world. The Fal-Cie (godlike beings) are beings of living crystal and magic in this world is powered by crystal. It just seems like Kabuto and Guren could have a lot of fun there. I love this story BTW. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liking this a lot. Can someone please givr me a ballpark on how often he updates this plz. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He showed them...when will he get his hands on a copy of the Naruto manga/anime? |
![]() ![]() Let the ass kicking begin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please do NOT make the students recognize the manga. Firstly, the tri-wiz was during 1994, and secondly, it doesn't make any sense why they should. If you don't have a reason that they should recognize them, then don't do it. You could make Kabuto write the manga himself after Voldemort is taken care of. |
![]() ![]() very good, loved |
![]() ![]() ![]() another good chapter i bet a few wizards/witches pissed their pants hope you don't have harry join hogwarts cant wait to see the potters reactions Side Note: i noticed a lot of peoples comuters/hard drives crashing and loosing their work: stories, chapters, notes, ect. please save your work on a flash/thumb drive and in many other locations so you don't loose your hard work. |
![]() ![]() A lot of things to like in this chapter, but I feel that the whole Jashin/Chaos Mode was a bit of an unnecessary Deus ex Machina (or is it a Diabolus, considering his alignment?) instead of Kabuto putting some effort in to outsmarting a stronger opponent (he's got the tools to beat them, especially if magic ignores that intangibility technique). Basically he was acting like a Leaf nin for large parts of the chapter, instead of the Magnificent B*****d he normally is in this fic. (TV Tropes WILL ruin your life. I still love that site, though.) From what I gathered while reading this one, you just wanted to mop up the Narutoverse and move on to the Potterverse; which I can respect as I've been looking forward to it as well. Also, whatever happened to Sasuke? He just sort of vanished from what I could tell, though I might have just missed his (agonizing, well-deserved) death. And finally, I have to ask a favor of you, though I know I have no control over where this story goes. Please, PLEASE, do not have the Potter's (or anyone else) "redeem" Kabuto. I, and hopefully many others, like him just the way he is. Manipulative, Ruthless, and Deceptive to everyone except his harem. |