Reviews for The Serpent Sorcerer
Joe Lawyer chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
Well, Orochimaru being cloned and becoming a female was certainly unexpected. I did find that rather strange and uncomfortable though, in ways that I didn’t for Yang. If I were you, I’d keep reinforcing the idea that she is NOT Orochimaru and that they are in fact different in many concrete ways.

With the deaths of all these Naruto characters, I wonder when the switch to the world of HP will take place.

Why no more lemons? We got to see a nice scene with Yang, but now nothing, Kabuto doesn’t even kiss his girls it seems.

Does Kabuto have any interest in sealing one of the tailed demons inside him? That would give him a tremendous source of power.
Joe Lawyer chapter 15 . 6/3/2014
Kabuto learned quite a bit about this birth world’s magic this chapter. That’s good. It leads me to believe that he might be making the changeover semi-soon.

Kakashi needs to die. The sheer number of times Kabuto has faced him and not finished him off is getting ridiculous. If you want him alive for some future chapter, maybe just don’t include him in the various battles, or do what you did here and have some unimportant leaf ninjas die instead.
Elquenodebesernombrado chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
Oto all resources should be moved to Suna, the replicants have to remove metals from the earth to generate more income to have to improve the defenses of suna with pupils
SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
If you could so easily have him sacrifice the lives of a hundred people on a whim in this realm, I hope he doesn't suddenly just grow morals later... for consistency. And I'd, personally like it better that way. :P
Joe Lawyer chapter 14 . 6/3/2014
So Sakura does one punch and manages to expose the secret to Tsunade’s super strength, something she’s likely jealously guarded her entire career. Lol… Kabuto/Harry could do a lot of damage if he practices and learns how to do that technique himself.
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
Yeah I agree with that other guy. A multi crossover after the HP world would be epic. The gang in the Star Wars universe would have so much potential, if u know any thing about SW that is. Hell, Kabuto/Harry already dress like a sith/Jedi with those robes.
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
Current fav story.
War Sage chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
good chapter
The Fox Paradox 9 chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
Mad that you killed hinata but I'm grateful that you gave her a quick death. Though I'm worried what Kaubto-Harry is going to do to her corpse. I still love this story and can't wait for Kabuto-Harry to return to the HP Universe and show everyone whose boss. Keep up the amazing work and stay awesome!
Soutrick chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
Great chapter
can't wait to see what will happen
and how he will shock the wizard world
T-B-R chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
great chapter, I like how your not pussy'ing(I cant believe I wrote that) around and killing some characters.
Alex2909 chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
love how orika turned out, her personality is awesome. things are going well for kabuto and his group. like how he has dealt with konoha so far
guhgiog08e9rhiogoiheg98whgiogo chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
Great chapter! Is Anko part of his group, or is she still his spy in Konoha?
Jamesk19 chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
Great chapter thanks for releasing them fast loving the story so far cant wait to see what kabuto/harry does when he goes back to the wizarding world cant help but feel it would be epic if u don't stop there and go to a new dimension/world after his time home is resolved would be amazing if it became multi crossover i can just see kabuto/harry in star wars world experimenting on all the unique species and minerals/teq that and the danger beasts/teigu from akame ga kiru can defiantly see Esdese being interested in him

God i am exited just thinking about how damn intresting annd epic that would be
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