Reviews for The Serpent Sorcerer
DeusImperator92 chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
Great chapter , tnx fot the update.
Soutrick chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
Great chapter
looking forward to see what he will learn
and how he will be when they return to his world
firelordeg chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as all the time and effort you put in to this please continue to update as life allows
Star Iron chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
Major divergences at this point and I'm glad that you're doing so. Not a big fan of this reincarnation thing since we've definitely had enough of that in canon but you did have a very interesting way of explaining Slytherin's slide into obscurity/notoriety. Hidane is definitely an interesting personality.

Did Yang need clones to make her nature enhanced rasengans before? It seems odd that she wouldn't have mastered it or was she just making a clone to hide her true abilities?

Just a side note. I laughed when I read Voldemort's spell repertoire since despite its brevity, that is pretty much all the magic we see him do in canon minus the horcrux creation of course.
coduss chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
fem Hidan?! could this be a new addition to the pairing?

great chapter, very interesting sub plot with being jashin's incarnation
Yinko chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
Shouldn't Kabuto be giving his subordinates the immortality ritual so that they won't die, himself as well of course.

I liked the part about Jashin being reincarnated into them, very cool. Are the timelines the same for the two worlds? I mean, Kabuto's like 18-20 and who knows what would have happened in the Wizarding world if it's been that long. Though, I wen't back and re-read the first couple of paragraphs of the story and found out that he's three years older than the 'chosen one' so they might still be coming up on the 4th year or something. Just something to consider.
joda-jiji chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
interesting will he get special powers for being jashin. cool story
NamiHello chapter 14 . 5/30/2014
THIS STORY IS AMAZING!
i love it! and im looking forward to the next chapter!
plums chapter 14 . 5/29/2014
I really wish you'd have Harry start killing Konoha shinobi. It just feels like he's ad-libbing lines around the standard canon plot. Besides the harem and innuendo comments, there's really nothing new here.
dobbys-stinger chapter 11 . 5/29/2014
BUT I think this it the best hp/kabuto I seen

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AceZ-Shadow chapter 14 . 5/29/2014
at first, you had a good idea of what you want and where you want to take your story, were your readers could follow, until your main character became waaaaaaaaay to over powered almost godlike... damm... and no direction at all, I mean where is Harry? the only thing you got is kabuto doing more than the manga and you don't need Harry Potter for that... you totally lost the other half of your crossover... what happened...?
FinalGuardian chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
I like the fix but there's a lot of misspelled words ans most of the sentences aren't put together properly.
Soutrick chapter 14 . 5/29/2014
Great chapter
though was exoecting more from Naruto after meeting Yami, he just went kyuubi

curious how Jiraya and Tsunade will take the news
Star Iron chapter 14 . 5/29/2014
Could Kabuto one day create micro-replicators and spread them throughout the nation to slowly leech chakra from the entire world? Was Yang by any chance based on the RWBY Yang? It would help with visualization. Sakura busting her hand on the bridge was pretty darn funny but it was a cool way of discerning the super strength technique.
Yinko chapter 14 . 5/29/2014
You changed her name from Yami to Yang for no reason and with no warning. I guess they're leaving Naruto alive for the moment so that they can get as much of Kyuubi's chakra as possible for her. Otherwise it makes no sense as he is truly weak.
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