Reviews for The Serpent Sorcerer
Yinko chapter 12 . 5/23/2014
Please tell me that worked. If he just AK'd Deidara then holy shit.
Aaron Leach chapter 12 . 5/23/2014
Awesome chapter.
coduss chapter 12 . 5/23/2014
what a twist! good chapter, interesting fight with pain, even if it was short
The Observant Reader chapter 12 . 5/23/2014
Awesome! Is Kabuto going to go Hogwarts?
joda-jiji chapter 12 . 5/23/2014
magic XD has he yet copied the dead bone pulse bloodline?
serialkeller chapter 11 . 5/22/2014
Awesome stuff :D Would be awesome if the HP world was connected to the stargate one or something, so you could eventually branch off there after HP too :D Would love some lemons though, anko is just asking for it :D
Yinko chapter 11 . 5/22/2014
Replicator summons sounds cool.

Akatsuki better run. Though, with Sasori there Kabuto/Harry might find his puppets or Sasori himself really interesting. If nothing else, there's the magnet release bloodline and Deidara has the explosion release.
Yinko chapter 4 . 5/22/2014
That's why shouldn't write the chunin exams. You have 11 chapters and 4 of them are the exams, that's more than a third of your chapters. Do you have any idea how many writers kill their stories trying to get through the exams? Best to just skip them.
Jin Masters chapter 11 . 5/22/2014
You are amazing. You have me liking kabuto/harry which oh my god what an idea...I honestly can't wait for the story to reach the wizarding world that will be so awesome. Keep up the good work and hope to read more soon
Daku-DarkNess316 chapter 11 . 5/22/2014
love this story cant wait to read more love what your doing with this story cant wait to read more
Sayer Rose chapter 11 . 5/21/2014
Please update as soon as you can I can't wait to read more. This is wicked Cool.
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 8 . 5/21/2014
Nice cliffy
Joe Lawyer chapter 11 . 5/21/2014
Huh. I like the story so far. I think you might have worked a bit too hard to shoehorn Harry into Kabuto’s canon role, but it’s still very entertaining. With all his training and ninja skills and experience in so many aspects of combat and warfare, I can’t help but think that when Harry and his mates return to his original world, they’re going to be like wolves among sheep. Add in Harry’s medical abilities and his experience doing research to recreate bloodlines and I think he’s going to be very dangerous. All those death eaters he kills are likely going to end up on a slab and dissected to figure out the ins and outs of magic, their manors sacked and everything valuable taken, including their libraries and any magical artifacts they possess.

When he returns, he and his girls could easily hit a few drug cartels as well and amass huge sums of money to buy a muggle and wizard home and expansive lands to base their operations.

The story is a bit tame for an M rated story. He’s got beautiful women around him at various times who are very interested in him but he seems to be the biggest ninja prude in the story. I’m wondering why you’re holding back on that front.

I’m looking forward to reading more.
Soutrick chapter 11 . 5/21/2014
Great chapter
Loved how you made Yami, though you could have given her red hair
looking forward to see how he will rescue Gaia
HolyKnight5 chapter 11 . 5/21/2014
So in this case, baseline Naruto now has all but lost the chance of use Sealing Hatred, as his Yin Chakra its all but absent. Yami however, her body with some time can produce her own Yang Chakra and reach this state. ..

About Yami's quick adaptation to be female. . . i'm thinking that the main issue, one overlooked for most people was that the Yondaime wrongly sealed the YANG, instead of the Yin in Naruto. . .if you remember the basic principles, Yang Chakra its linked to the male and rational aspect of the soul, while Yin its linked to the Dark, Emotional and FEMENINE side of its soul.

Everything seeks balance, and when Minato shoved that BIG-assed mass of Yang Chakra into Naruto, likely forced his soul and body to produce a far bigger amount of Yin Chakra. However, as Naruto fell into the mask, he also repressed his own Yin, his darkness, what shot his chakra control to hell.

Now that Yami its in a body, what FITS her natural energies. ..she can grow unbound. . .as she got Yang chakra of the Kyuubi, this only balanced her body unlike Naruto, and as she got the fragment of the Complete Kyuubi. . .she's becoming superior to her once sibiling.(Note: i suspect that besides Wind, and the Chakra chains, Yami may have another elemental affinity, very possibly water from Kushina, and through this a possible avenue to acquire Hyoton, the Ice Release)

It would be rather amusing if Yami adopts the "Baka little brother" treatment with Naruto. . .another point is if Yami has memories that Naruto repressed in order to hold the mask. . .repressed memories what give Yami ammo to try to mentally break Naruto. . .
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