Reviews for The Serpent Sorcerer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait to see how the personality thing plays out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() im guessing itachi's final gambit with kabuto with his sharigan induced genjutsu will make him truly remember who he is...though the snake comming out of his stomach i will say once again...illogical ecen for the ninja world, that would have to mean the snakes made of cartiladge or somthing similar in order for it to be mounted on just sheer dense muscle, not to mention the problems beingd down and such. which is why i said to place the snake or snake's in a similar manner to doc octavious from the spider man movies...makes the most sense to be placed near the spine or around mid point of the spinal colum to allow the bones to simple...merge or create a sort of joint bone in the middle of the spine to allow the snake to grow from there. or it could be that its just one of his snake summons attached to him...in a more permament fashion. still wonder what time youll have kabuto/harry go into hogwarts...or which fraction he will join? i still suggest not a fem orochimaru though. |
![]() ![]() Awesome story! You should go with the fem Naruto idea. |
![]() ![]() I like the chapter's and Pairings. |
![]() ![]() this story is awesome |
![]() ![]() Good start to the story. You need to better your grammar |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story so far! I hope you update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the fem naruto and the fem orochimaru idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter as for Femnaruto and femorchimaru not bad |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter liked the meeting with Karin and your idea for a fem-Naruto is a good one not so sure about a fem-Orochimaru |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job on the chapter eh, those two more than make up for tayuya, i support the addition of both, your way of adding them in sounds really well though out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the chapter's and for Pairings I don't like Karin but okey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww I really like Tayuya! Why doesn't Harry pick her up when he picks up Kimimaru's corpse? She was literally left under a bunch of tress like 1 km from Kimimaru's location. I really like Fem-Naruto idea. It's pretty clever. Also, as an opportunistic spy, wouldn't Kabuto take the time during the confusion of the invasion to steal the Forbidden Scroll of Sealing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this is interesting, look forward to seeing how this plays out and if any of his memories from before he arrived will come back. Keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont suggest the female orochimaru, but the cloned naruto on the other hand with more dominant uzumaki genes, well that may work. also may i make a suggestion? instead of the snake comming from his stomach why no his back? (like right below the ribcage on either side of himself, thus allowing him to naturally use the yamata orochi technique to its real potential, thought with some unfortunete drawbacks of lessened intellengence and a hard time truly focusing dude to multiple veiw points and originally being human. also for the wizard part, just tonks me thinks, kabuto would originally be intrested in her ability to shiftshape almost perfectly into another being, even with the need for extra raw resources in form of edible food in order to compensate for the changes. plus her family line has a bit of crazy, it just needs to be pulled out...some ladies like guren and anko would do quite fine. plus as a guide and an Auror he will have somone in the ministry that while a low level employee, would have enough of a reputation to be able to get away with some common information that he might need. so the female naruto with kushina's more prominant genes and minato's more personality would work out fine. plus i see minato as a bit of a closet pysho...no one can kill an entire batalion of people and not feel a damn thing about it...the rasengan is also a nasty ass technique, i mean it grinds and churns and tears flesh, bone, and organs apart if used correctly, and thats the unfined version! withe elemental power its a S-class technique suited for warfare. and finally: i also suggest that kabuto/harry finds and uses a balasilisk corpse to make manda.2 even more deadly, hide that can resist up to A-rank chakra attacks and a poison that acts like a acid? not to mention its stare can kill with a glance from its eyes? (i think it more of stops a living being from, well, living via true unrelenting instantainious fear!) |