Hm I like the chapter.I allways like the science behind Bloodline's and while Orichimaru creepy and maybe pedo I very like him in series but Not as much Madara or Sage of 6 Path's

Awesome story! If you end up doing a harem, could you have him paired with Guren, Anko, and Tonks? Looking forward to reading more!

just wondering what is the age of kabuto so far?
wondering whats going to happen when/if he goes back to england
cant wait to see what happens next

good story so far, faved and followed

as to pairings...can i request anko? i know she is supposed to hate orochimaru, but its a fanfiction, it would be easy to twist events to make her not hate him and be with harry/kabuto...

This story needs a lot of work. The premise is interesting and could lead to some great character development.
However, you really need to have someone read over your work before you post it. You change perspective too much, sometimes in the middle of a sentence. There's also a plethora of grammar and spelling mistakes throughout both chapters. If you can fix those, I would like to see more of this.

heres a little change u can do kabuto can be harrys past life

Hmm I like it.