Reviews for Unthinkable |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another good chapter. I'm enjoying watching the story unfold. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! This this is really good! Are you continuing this? It has been a while since you last updated, and I was wondering if you were a slow updater, the type that would update like 6 chapters in a week every once and a while (like I would probably be), or if you had just lost interest... Please continue, it's looking great so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! No need to re-work it! The fight scene was awesome! Loved the details! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is getting intense! Really loving it! Love how you not just tell but show the absence of Oliver in the team (team arrow) and the effects of him not having them anymore. So Oliver goes dark again. He's been pushed to the "Wall"! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so excellent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow awesome chaper thanks so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice combat scene. I would have loved for it to last a bit longer, have it described more, but movement and reactions were spot on. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love your story it is amazing :) oliver feels so guilty and that what makes him human in this story and felicity is just so in love with him ... I hope we see some action with them soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! So Felicity has something to work on now, but given we're dealing with Amanda Waller and she has many "toys", i dunno if that evidence will prove much useful. Willing to see Felicity handles it, which... Is another reason i can't wait for next chapter. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter, cant wait for the next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Took me a while to get signed in to leave you a review. While I was trying to remember my password I read all the chapters of your story. They were all excellent. I'm looking forward to more interaction between Felicity and Oliver. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really can't describe how much i love this chapter. Seriously i mean it! It was totally different from what i could see coming and i loved it! Oh.. And the action and and... [Chris Hemsworth Thor's voice] "This Chapter, i love it. Another! Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh, so what exactly was he supposed to get? Wouldn't he already have access? Who were the others? T |