Reviews for Black Ivy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story alot! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the story. It was fun and Harry was powerful and good. I'm glad that you didn't make Ginny evil unlike Ron. I really liked the background history of the founders. I like how Draco turned good and Harry's relationship with Dapne. Thanks so much for writing this. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story is quite intriguing. So many twists and turns. I love that Daphne, Susan and Blaise are part of the story as well. His parents are alive? So much bad stuff has happened to Harry. Can't wait to see what happens next. Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, nope. Couldn't even finish this chapter. I got as far as the bit with Draco and just... nope. The rest of your story had it's issues, but this chapter was just bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted so much not to continue reading this story. But I jjust can't stop. It's like a train-wreck. This chapter was... highly disappointing. If you were too lazy to write the whole feast, then at least wrap it in a decent prior and after scene, and have the sense not to state "i'm too lazy to X" in the middle of the chapter. And then just the crazy number of issues you've opened in this story with Lilly and James showing back up... Ouch. Just ouch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am unsure when exactly this was written. I have only read the first chapter and it has led me to do something I rarely if ever do. Leave a review before finishing the whole story at least twice. but when the first chapter has you doing happy wiggles and squealing in excitement I believe you have to say Something. I will say I have lurked on this site, reading many harry potter stories, enjoy in most, often searching for ones i have read before. Indeed I was actually searching for a different story however, the title and synopsis caught my eye and draw me in like a moth to flame. This has many tried and true tropes but I can still say that i haven't read anything similar to this with James potter as his bio dad and I can honestly say I am intrigued and delighted to continue writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() er surely the letter would be signed mum and dad |
![]() ![]() ![]() luna's mother's name is Pandora |
![]() ![]() SPOILERS ASHLEY COLTON IS AQUILLA LESTRANGE OR AQUILLA BLACK ... IS IT NOT , I MEAN , ITS PRETTY OBVIOUS AT THIS POINT ... BUT STILL ONLY READERS WHO ARE FULLY IMMERSED INTO THIS FIC CAN FIND IT OUT BECAUSE THE HINT IS A RATHER LLARGE ONE BUT COMPARED TO THE WHOLE CHAPTER THIS HINT IS GIVEN SUCH A SHORT SCREENTIME THAT MOST AND BY MOST I MEAN 90% OF THE READERS SKIMMED OVER IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting twist or unexpected turn as you put it. It would explain a lot of Dumbledore had been replaced by Grindlewald. It looks like the Potters were living in the muggle world and I wonder if something was supposed to happen to Rose so she never made it to Hogwarts. I wonder if somehow her birthday is also July 31st. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking this story so far, I like the twists on the "Harry finds his mother's school trunk" idea. Kudos for your editing skills, the only goof that jumped out at me was your use of insight where you should have used incite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find this story a good read and very original. You completely surprised me several times. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This plot is very original and interesting! Your Dumbledore is so evil and insane! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to let you know that while I haven't finished this story yet, I am LOVING it and looking forward to Dumbles getting all sorts of vengeance because of his stupidity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() making hermoine a pureblood spits on and destroys everything about her character |