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LoveInTheBattleField chapter 9 . 3/26/2016
Great, keep it coming. Happy Easter!
DianeB chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
Oh my gosh, what a great chapter! You really captured the voices and the feel of the place and people. Your writing flows well and is easy to visualize. And Snape's crack about "The Boy Who Lives To Irritate" was bang-on for him. I can't promise I'll have time to continue reading and reviewing, but I really liked this start. Well done.
Amar 2 chapter 9 . 1/27/2015
Poor Severus! You wrote this so well one can actually feel his pain. Well done.
Free2BMe1 chapter 9 . 1/26/2015
This is a wonderful story so far. I love the changes you've made to canon to allow a more mature telling of the story we love. You've really captured characters well here. Snape is probably the most difficult Potter character to depict and you're doing it brilliantly. I love his interactions with Minerva best but you seem to have everyone well in hand. I can't wait to see how you evolve the story from here now that Hermione has seen a bit behind the mask he presents. Please keep these wonderful chapters coming. Well done!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 8 . 7/4/2014
Good, keep it coming.
Amar 2 chapter 8 . 7/4/2014
Yo write Severus with heart. That is good, because he was presented as a heartless bastard, which I refuse to accept. Well done.
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 7 . 6/24/2014
Nice, keep it coming.
Amar 2 chapter 7 . 6/24/2014
Ah, Severus - Hermione interraction. Now it s time to get over Lily if that's possible. Maybe not completely, but a bit to fall on love once more.
Amar 2 chapter 6 . 6/24/2014
I love to see "behind the veil" of Snape and his deeds. Thank you for this.
Amar 2 chapter 5 . 6/24/2014
Dumbledore decided to show more of his secrets in your story than in the original Rowling s one. That s interesting, I am dying to read more and more and more...
Amar 2 chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
I like your writing style - so good, much much better than some pieces of fanfics I have come accross. You write as a mature author with his/her own style. I put your story into my story alerts - it is a pleasure to read. The only thing I see as improbable is Sev nickname used by the staff and Dumbledore and Minerva - called Erva is improbable too. Anyway, I like the adult point of view - we are not children anymore, we know how dark the world can be.
Amar 2 chapter 3 . 6/24/2014
I can t wait what happens next. I just hope Snape survives this time.
Amar 2 chapter 2 . 6/24/2014
It seems s great story. Snape was furious about Marvolos ring because he wanted to revive Lily, that s what I believe. Am I right, I will see...
the dragon and the rose chapter 7 . 6/23/2014
It'll be interesting to see if Professor Snape can ever manage to see beyond the labels he's slapped on Harry and Hermione, in particular. (I kinda agree with him about Ron.) While Harry is hotheaded, suspicious and often irrational when it comes to Snape, he's basically a decent person whose had far too many loads of dragon dung dropped on him in his young life. Hermione, while indeed something of a know-it-all, has changed; she can see there's more to life than books and flawless grades. She's far deeper than Snape has ever given her credit for, especially now.
dancesontrains chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
Very interesting start! I don't have the time to read the other chapters right now, but I'm looking forward to it. Maybe you can persuade me on the merits of HGxSS...
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