|Reviews for Purity|
| Ghost2656 chapter 2 . 6/29
It's like you are making Weiss as awful as you can. We get it, move on.
| LazyNothing chapter 1 . 5/28
there has never been book that can make me as aroused as this one
| PaladinSans chapter 13 . 2/16
| PatrolAllThots chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
Ruby is moving at supesonic speed with artillery level firepower in order to kill grimm, there is literally no fucking way a .228 round would hurt a grimm why do you people not watch RWBY before you write this stuff? A hunter could casually beat everyone in the fallout series at the same time and still be fine afterwards, do you not realise the power difference here?
| Hmm chapter 9 . 7/30/2017
"peace was usually the precursor to war" You do realize how silly this statement is right? It's like saying bring alive is usually the precursor to death. If you aren't at War, you are most likely at peace. I suppose you could say uprisings, rebellions, cold wars, which technically aren't wars don't count as peace. But then America was in a Cold War with Russia for a while in the 20th century. But it was generally still considered peaceful. Idk, it's still pretty weird thing to say.
| TheReaperCommander chapter 13 . 6/4/2017
Great story, will you continue to write it?
| EMIYA KURO chapter 12 . 4/7/2017
| dragon slayer of death 98 chapter 8 . 4/1/2017
i hope either the courier or wanderer kill cinder or one of her lackeys brutally
| Axcel chapter 8 . 1/6/2017
No reason for Lone Wanderer and Courier to fight each other. Especially since the only reason Royce isn't killing White Fang is because it isn't strictly necessary thanks to law enforcement and to avoid alienating his team or getting arrested.
| Axcel chapter 3 . 1/6/2017
Royce proves unbeatable. Just like in Fallout canon. Anything else is nonsensical since he massacres armies of powered armored soldiers and behemoths and deathclaws by the end of the game.
| Axcel chapter 2 . 1/6/2017
A shame no one is commenting in the fic about how much ass Royce kicks despite not having activat d aura or at least no aura training.
| Wednesday's Jest chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Cautious and suspicious Yang with a optimistic and outspoken Blake is a bit weird. It's also kind of off how Yang didn't bother to unfold her weapon until the second battle.
It kind of feels like you have things happen because you think they would be cool. Which isn't a horrible way to go about setting the scene, but it does make it feel like a series of semi-connected events instead of the natural progression of events.
| quentin3655 chapter 13 . 10/18/2016
THE STORY IS DYING!
MORE SACREFICES! WE NEED MORE BLOOD SACREFICES! KILL IN THE NAME OF STAFFSARGENT! TEAR TO FLESH FROM THE BONES OF THE WEAK! BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD , SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!
| Dr.Schadenfreude chapter 1 . 9/26/2016
While this story is great and is still the most popular, it is dead, bereft of life, it rests in pieces, it's pushing up daisies, its run down the curtain and joined the choir invisible. It's practically cadaverific. This is a dead story. It voom if you put 4 million volts through the author but it might be easier (and more legal) to simply rewrite it ourselves. Who knows what would happen then, after all Fallout 4 has been out and it might be interesting to see either Nate or Nora try being a teacher or counselor. Maybe a rouge element intent on finding Cinder and destabilizing her plans. Maybe show that a protagonist has been on Remnant for such a long time that they left notes or adopted one the cast.
| OzWibs chapter 8 . 8/16/2016
All right. This is a "Fuck yea" moment, I'd love to see more Courier, maybe a Wanderer/Courier team at some point. Always loved New Vegas, probably actually more than three...