Reviews for Theoria Online
Bergholt Stuttley Johnson chapter 1 . 2/5/2018
This is an interesting concept.
Followed in case of future updates.

My main issue is that Issei's method for impact damage reduction does not involve breasts in any form.
SnappingFlower chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
Interesting premise of the story, this feels like a MMO Gamer with formulas and such. This is really interesting, I hope this one-shot could be updated, even if just once. The story needs a whole lot more recognition too.
Lucio BetaBlake chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Sucks that this just a one shot. This is actually really good.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
What! This sounds beyond epic heck u can make thus a pilot for an anime!
Loopsey chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
This is, to put it bluntly, great. Please make another chapter if you can find the creativity for it. This is too good to leave as a one shot.
the Composcreator chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
holy crap man this is great!
Chichiryuutei chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Interesting one shot, i would like it to be multiple chapter but it is your decision.

One correction though, it is Kiryuu Aika not Hiryuu Aika
WarriorMan199456 chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
A nice change of the DxD Universe. This reminds of me of Sword Art Online. Overall very excellent story. I love the dynamic duo relationship between Issei and Ddraig.

Very good one-shot. Hope you have a good day,