|Reviews for Advancing|
| Tori chapter 4 . 3/30/2018
I really wish you had continued this story because the storyline is amazing...
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
PLEASE CONTINUE! THANK YOU
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
Love this chapter! Cant wait for the pack to meet Derek and Chloe. Will Chloe meet Jamie?
| Vera Kate chapter 4 . 7/11/2014
I don't know if Savannah and Adam would be the best or worst influnces on kids. It really depends on whose perspective you're looking through.
And now we're off to BL...
| Vera Kate chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
Its a good chapter - establishing everyone and some more background while also moving the plot forward.
I think ff ate up your scene break spacing? I know it always eats mine so I have to manually put it back in.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2014
I love this story! And can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
| 0-bailey-0 chapter 2 . 6/26/2014
I love it please update soon.
| Vera Kate chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
Can't wait to see where you go next!
| Monica Dornoff chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
You are an excellent writer; I couldn't stop myself from reading it! Please continue writing this!
| Lupa94 chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Really good! Please update ASAP can't wait !
| Vera Kate chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Oh dear. Controlling the living? I suppose it could be rationalized as that moment between heart beats, but yikes.
Well - at least Chloe won't have to deal with any new rotting bodies?
Its a very intriguing idea. Poor, poor Chloe.
The idea too that this is all sex linked ... well, I can assume we all should be grateful that Simon was a "success" because I imagine he's still popular with the ladies.
So she is going essentially be forced into the Nasts unless she and Derek take off or she finds some way for Jaime to take her in.