|Reviews for Pokemon X Kalos Journey|
| GuestWithIdeas chapter 3 . 9/10/2014
you know what I like about this story? One thing is you have Calem the male hero of the game being the hero, most of the time people go with the female equivilant because of the tv shows- curse you Ash!
what I liked about this chapter was the Pikachu chase that looked like something that would happen for real.
One thing you can do is don't be afriad to use character development, I read a story called "Soul Flare" and the Calem in that story was very well done, I'm not saying you Calem needs to be exatly like the one in Soul Flare, but you could look at that one, and use it as a template to develop Calem in this story, just a thought I had. anyway good work and update when you can.
| Dark Purple Insanity chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Yes, there are ones with more than 300000 words, but those people either have a whole lot of time on their hands, have been making the story for a long time, or just repeated a word/sentence many times throughout the story.