Ima see where this goes but that downgrade of Naruto to LAGOON BOY pissed me off

Yo if she dont take you back after you literally shed 3 pounds of flesh for her then she aint worth it bro

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I don't get it, Naruto has a sharingan and knows Minato is his father but need clone to make the Rasengan. Is he just after Jiraiya training? Post Pein attack? Post 4th war?

Damn so much happened in this chapter and my head in still spinning a bit from processing it all. Introducing the Green as a major plot point is amazing, and the bringing in of Swamp Thing was cool, though I am a bit disappointed he didn’t really have much of a role in terms of combat since I’m sure he could have solved a lot of problems in the fight against Kiba and Shino. Speaking of which, awesome fight and I like the tactics employed.
Though on the note of the Green and also the Melt, since you have Vixen and BB who are animal power users, any chance of bringing in The Red as well?
To be honest, I didn’t feel the connection between Jaime and Raven when they first got together so I was actually not all that affected by their break up. But now I am REALLY glad they are for sure broken up with no chance of recovery because the way Billy and Raven play off each other is golden. Though from a 3rd person perspective I’m sure it would look pretty weird to see a full grown Shazam(Captain Marvel) flirting with raven so it’s cool that you bypassed that and just plopped the flirty stuff in after he changed back to billy. I ship BillyxRaven really hard now.
The new recruits training with the Bijuu is very interesting and I can’t wait to see what they will learn and how strong they’ll become as a result. A bit of a kinda sorta time skip I’m sure since it took stargirl several days to reach Son’s area in space.
The attack on Metropolis is peaking my curiosity since I’m not sure who the person Madara will be fighting with is when they go to stop Naruto from reviving Tsunade.
Anyway, all around, excited to see more. Update soon.

I just can’t tell what kind of Naruto this is. He seems to be post-kurama friendship mode, yet can’t do a single handed rasengan. He also gets easily one shotted by superboy. Its just really confusing. Post kurama friendship Naruto is pretty damn strong, yet this Naruto seems pretty meh. Is this like, an AU Naruto? Maybe a different Naruto shippuden?

Which Naruto is this? I was under the impression that this was a later, post madara Naruto. He’s still in the “can’t make a rasengan by himself” phase?

He must have some sort of mega sharingan to even come close to comparing to Superman, much less make him look like an ant. I wonder what it can do

Amazing chapter, great work as always, though i do hope platinum is able to break the lights hold on her, would hate to see it lead to her being killed off, definitely one of my favorites in this fic, also cant wait to see what all naruto has planned to make tara squirm for her betrayal. Keep up the amazing work and please update soon!

Great chapter. I actually quite liked the Billy/Raven thing.

Esta muy bueno el capitulo que bueno que regresaste a tu historia mas que ahora ivo controla con lex a platino mas que saben los planes de naruto espero que pronto lo averiguen mas que va a pasar en la mision mas que encontro raven para ayudar a naruto a despertar el rinnegan mas que va a pasar en el ataque a metropolis mas que puedan detener a luz de sus planes

first off I really love what you did here. seems you might be hinting on the Upside Down Man shown in Justice League Dark. it's small and subtle that could be easily missed though I could be mistakend.

anyways this is going to be really crazy on what you'll be doing soon and can't wait for certain events to be revealed on Madara's plans

This is an OC called naruto and a fucking little bicth,