Reviews for Shinobi Rising |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I would have preferred you gave him mastery over tsunades chakra enhanced strength before shadow possession jutsu just to level the playing field with other enemies when it comes to strength. Also if your going to give naruto more jutsu then give him ones without to many drawbacks, the shadow possession technique has a drawback if the person who is trapped gets hurt then so does the holder. Also it would be cool if you gave naruto a flying ability. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto is such a boss. He deserves to be leader. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this was fun that Naruto knows a little more on techniques that he will have to work more on and wonder what else he will be doing next. |
![]() ![]() Ooo fun give naruto fate s helmet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Naruto is the leader. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm wonder who'll come through the rift when it's time anyways cool how Naruto is leader now wonder what'll happen when his secrets come out anyways keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now Naruto is getting beat up by D-Rank villains? You write well but the way you limit Naruto is depressing. This story should be called "The ShitEater", if you make Naruto this shitty you should have send Naruto to DC dimension right after he returned from road trip with Jiraya, he actually feels weaker than when he come back from Jiraya training trip... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dammit another under powered naruto story...His teammate was Sakura, I'm pretty sure Naruto should take 1 freaking punch... |
![]() ![]() will Naruto kill |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is going be good as long as it doesn't die out ike the majority of naruto x justice league crossovers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting things be happening. |
![]() ![]() Superman is way stronger then you think |