Flying figure, rivers of fire, what the heck?

Don't tell me some moron reawakened/replaced/whatever Madara?

Sorry, this was a chaotic piece of, if you will forgive me, garbage.

Naruto is no longer 14is, the rest of the team should, after byalia, understand, and the cliffhanger for cliffhangers sake is... Bad writing.

I hope very much this gets better again...

Even given the tradition of fanfic making this part of YJ even more confusing than it was originally, let me sum up my reaction in a great big HUH, WHAT?

I think nobody liked that joker.

Heck, I liked him less than Jared Letos Joker, who was at least DIFFERENT and not just "as is but worse" , of a Joker...

Jahahahahahargk, "nothing can stand before the light". Oh my. Let's see who is still alive to come over... I for one doubt it'll be one of the good guys, as most of them caught multiple cases of... Death. And unlike oh say, the zetsu, or Madara, they don't tend to come back from it very often... Honestly, stupid to not use the zombie jitsu via sacrificing death row prisoners and getting back all your most wise, learned, and strong ancestors.. M

At times your writing is far too hectic and leaves out details.

Sure,, I am horribly late to the party, I kind of found it by accident, but it sounds like a very interesting crossover...

Hmmm, Naruto apprentices to the poor sod who had to put up with Babu until he could no longer and stopped.

NABU always seemed like a huge idiot to me, given his intelligence, why the heck didn't he create a continuous "Cult of Fate", he might even call it Fate(s) Grand Order.

Teach people to wear him on unimportant days, teach them magic for say 22 hours for each day they volunteer as host, and twice that on previously known extra dangerous missions.

He'd be the man who brought great Magics back to earth, carved a new, centralized and order oriented culture of magic, knowledge and sharing of the burdens of power.

But what does he do? Force himself on not one but several people, assuming he is always right, etc...

Too bad I, before getting the NABU Back story reeeally liked Dr. Fate. He wears my 2 favored colors combined, floats, has a cool helmet, and shoots ANKHS from his hands!

How we have been deceived.

Back to topic: nice start. Sasuke sacrifices his eye... Nah, he would never do that. Must have been Pein or Itachi.

this dogshit chapter just makes me so happy that you're fucking gone. Degenerate freaks like you don't deserve to taint the world with your constant bullshit.

Tell me it was Raz Al Hypocrit making the comment avout childsoldiers

The start of where it goes downhill...

To anyone interested in reading this story, if you can ignore and skip over all the Hiruzen&Hanabi sections then it's a 10/10 fic. It you count the Hiruzen&Hanabi sections, then it's like a 4/10 fic.

4 years later? Just edit the story as Hiatus or Complete

What the hell? I’m so confused by hanabi’s age. How could he possibly have killed a mother who died soon after her giving birth?

I still want to know what sort of drugs Hanabi and Hiruzen were on in this whole story. This is one of my favourite fics of all time, but it would be 300% better if those two were not in it.

He can do it after the sage of Six Paths gives him assurance powers.