I'm re-reading this fic and damn I completely forgot how retarded Hiruzen is and how retarded Hanabi is for continously supporting with his BS.

From rereading this I'm wondering now, if they actually can have kids, and the issue wasn't just luthors flawed cloning process?

ok

Oh yeah, since Kaguya never had the chance to appear, Hanabi and everyone else don't know that the Infinite Tsukyomi is just a ploy to steal everyone's chakra. Oof.

I can't believe that Naruto goes along with Hanabi and Hiruzen's BS, and why Hiruzen is so clearly mentally disabled in so many ways.

Why does Naruto need a clone for rasengan? He's known how to use single hand rasengans since the Pain arc, and this Naruto is from the war arc based on his relationship with Kurama.

Absolutely awesome in every way!

Major plot twist

I am started by to feel like you are taking your own spin on the origins on the teen titans

I just finished this chapter and I realized that you just totally dropped Beast Boy out of the Timeline. Man, he had really cool powers.

Tsunade is stronger than Superboy at this point tho

He can hiraishin and has eternal mangekyo sharingan but he can't one hand a rasengan?

Well this chapter officially killed the story for me. I can't believe I wasted an hour and a half of my life to read about an underpowered and frankly idiotic ooc naruto. Him deciding to leave the beasts is the last fucking straw. Not to mention how annoying it is that you brought more people from his world. That totally kills the uniqueness of a Shinobi in YJ of which about 70% of a crossover relies on.

Yeah this joker sucks but getting villains from Naruto world sucks even more

Naruto is so OOC its embarrassing, he is literally replaceable with anyone and the story wouldn’t change, not to mention he is lowballed to hell, I don’t even want to know what went through this authors mind when writing this, probably nothing tbh