Reviews for Shinobi Rising
Guest chapter 24 . 10/12/2019
Que estúpidos son aveces los villanos loco, es obvio que Madara no va a servir a la luz nunca de echo seguro se apodere de ella, pero lo más importante es que quiero ver cómo Hanabi reacciona ante esto
Guest chapter 11 . 10/4/2019
Me gusta como pusiste a Superboy con Hanabi y el echo de que eligieras a ella en ves de un personaje repetitivo y cliché como Sakura ohh ahí sí que no leía está historia gracias por no hacerlo, por otro lado leí varios comentarios mandándote al diablo por hacer a Naruto muy débil pero no es débil un tu fic solo se limita y cabe remarcar que Naruto NUNCA supo pelear jamás aprendió un estilo de pelea así que es malísimo en eso y las katas de las ranas no cuenta ya que solo sirven cuando está en modo Sennin es por eso que me gusta tu fic, realmente odio las historias donde el prota está OP, son un asco para mí no ahí esfuerzo en esas historias, bien eso es todo muy bueno el cap loco
Zen-Aku The Spirit Of The Wolf chapter 7 . 10/3/2019 of the most realistic options for the way this could have gone and its the one thing people complained about being grimdark and stupid? "female goes out on mission, meets unexpected opposition, shit happens, she gets raped as was likely to happen anyway, gets pregnant, has child. eventually kills herself for dishonoring her clan and being shunned because of her noble stature." the last part is literally the reason kakashi is an orphan. his dad committed suicide for similar if stupider reasons than hers. she lost the love of her life, got raped because she encountered opposition, and killed herself after having her entire life destroyed. as a noblewoman that actually seems normal.
Zen-Aku The Spirit Of The Wolf chapter 6 . 10/1/2019
i call BS on so much of this. there's no way for a robot to synthesize chakra. it doesn't have life. thats why puppets couldn't do it. also the sage mode thing is bullshit too. using sage mode is 10x easier with this team going on. all he has to do is stand back while his team holds the fort for a minute (which they've done multiple times already) and gather chakra to use. thats just your way of keeping him using it all the time.
Zen-Aku The Spirit Of The Wolf chapter 5 . 9/30/2019
oh god the wanking. superboy would never say that
Zen-Aku The Spirit Of The Wolf chapter 4 . 9/30/2019
i think the worst part is he's not using the shadow clone jutsu like he usually does.
Zen-Aku The Spirit Of The Wolf chapter 4 . 9/30/2019
does he just not have sage mode? or any of his skills?
Zen-Aku The Spirit Of The Wolf chapter 3 . 9/30/2019
what was that? jesus.
Asumodeus chapter 6 . 9/4/2019
yep, you just lost me. Someone else would prob like this story, but I just find this story a total let down and I am done. Good luck or whatever.
Asumodeus chapter 4 . 9/4/2019
meh, so super weak naruto is going to fight the enemies he had when he was strong. He is going to be curb stomped like a little child. I had such high hopes for this story, but it has just been one let down after another.
Asumodeus chapter 2 . 9/4/2019
wow, naruto is super fucking weak. like sakura before shippuuden weak.
Fate3841 chapter 68 . 8/22/2019
Great story can't wait for the next part
Guest chapter 7 . 7/27/2019
Have hinata fall into despair, get gang raped, broken and knocked up. Begin cutting herself and eventually commits suicide. Fucking why? What it the fuck did that being to the story.

Author can go fuck himself with a rusty iron spike.

Rape is not something needed in a story, let alone a young justice one. To have a well liked character like her who grew up with a fairly tough life have a fucked up tragedy and end like that just for dramas sake. Yeah the author can go fuck themselves. The hell with this story.

Thanks for wasting my time with your garbage as well by not bothering to give a warning for content like that being in your damned story ass wipe.
Darth Revan II chapter 32 . 7/23/2019
If Azerath has doors to other dimensions, why didn't Naruto Land there instead of the tower of fate?
Darth Revan II chapter 24 . 7/23/2019
Which Robin is in young Justice? Richard 'Dick' Grayson , Tim Drake or Damian Wayne?
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