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sua história é ótima

I dont really mind how you write your fanfics cause everyone is different and unique. Just because someone said that they dont understand it, that does not mean everyone else is to. I actually understand when you said you started this at grade 6th and new ideas always came. That always happen to me too, but what I admire about you is that you are brave to post it and share it with the world. Dont pay attention to what haters said. haters usually hate you either they actually see you as a threatthey hate themselvesthey want to be you. So chin up, and fave the world! (or internet in this case)
Hope you will update soon cause I love your story 3

Please stop listening to others. No person writes the same way. If other people have issues following along, that’s not your issue. Look at game of thrones. Those books jump around so much it makes my head hurt, yet I still READ them. Let people bitch all they want. It’s your story. I enjoy reading it. I have no problems following along. Hope this helps you to understand you have readers that enjoy your story how it is!

don't believe all you read, if they cannot read between the lines and see what a truly amazing story this is then I'm sorry for their lack of imagination. I'm not a hater, I despise that word. All in all keep writing you are doing an awesome job.

Don't let anyone stop you from doing something you enjoy. I used to post stories and my husband thought fanfiction was stupid. He made me feel bad for taking time to post stories, so I stopped. I would still read and occasionally review, but I stopped posting. Ironically my son who was a toddler at the time is now 16 and loves fanfiction. He told me I should start posting again because I love to write and that I should have never stopped doing something that I loved. So, I am passing that message along to you. Don't get discouraged. Keep telling your story. If someone doesn't like it, they can stop reading.

I'll beta for you
Ok.
It's a good story don't give up ok.
Hugabouv.

A friend told me that you posted a recap that was supposed to explain things. It didn't unfortunately. I agree with whoever you're talking about (the anonymous review), but I think one problem is that the things that are happening are just not linked together? They're just happening. Kagome didn't tell Sesshomaru she was pregnant because...she just didn't, but then felt justified in being mad that he wasn't apart of their daughter's life. I think the plot holes, or better yet, the explanation of moving from one point in the plot to the other isn't explained. This last chapter was confusing as well. I think you have great ideas, but they're sewn together in a choppy way. Feels like an art film that's about philosophy that people aren't familiar with. Keep going though, just because it's not for me doesn't mean someone else won't love it. Ultimately though, you write to get it out. Keep going.

WHAT? This really does seem like two stories in one, the confusion is very frustrating and making me debate if I want to continue to read.

Wow... Amazing story great job...

That was odd.

That was strange.

Kagome is in a coma.

Kagome isn't dead.

That was scary.