It really interesting sis I like chapter two

You wrote that Kagome is 34 years old in this chapter (16).
She should only be 26 years old because you wrote in chapter 3, that it was 8 years that had passed from the time she and Sessho were married and conceived their child. Kagome was 18 at that time. So their child should be around 8 years old.

Interesting story. I am looking forward to reading the next few chapters that are posted.

Well...to get reborn means first to die...poor Asumi...shr is but a child therefore does not realize the full extend of her wish

It was great and long chapter. I've always loved the way you portray the characters in your story, the way you describe how they feel, how they look, almost makes me feel as if I can just imagine them as if they are actually there. The way the problems and solutions sometimes makes the story even more interesting. I'm greatly enjoying this a lot.

This chapter is very engaging and revealing towards some of the side characters and towards side problems. This chapter shows that Asumi also has many more pain and anger towards herself and the two packs besides her. It also shows a bit how inyuasha really is when it comes to taking care of her when Kagome isn't there for her at the time. Even though he despises sesshomaru very much, inyuasha is very willing to do anything to take care of Asumi. Sesshomaru as of right now, is mostly clashing his feelings or emotions inside of me or even fighting his own inner demon. Even though he says he can control himself he still has a lot to learn before actually taking off trying to care for Asumi. So as of now he's only just trying to do as much as he could in taking care of Asumi. Kagome's situation as of right now would be facing an oni that she somewhat recognize. It may be either her inner demon trying to control her or it could even be seeing a figment of what could of sesshomaru's more demonic side into the form of an oni. Overall this chapter showed all the problems that some of the side characters are facing and the main characters own problem at the time right now especially the problem between now much the two families hate for each other. Very well done.

This chapter was, amazingly heartbreaking when it had came to The end of it. Really well detailed and good use of the setting that takes place. It's nice to see someone using the setting as also being part of the main conflict about who took the picture.

The chapter is very interesting and the conflict is building up to get to a climatic point in the story. This chapter so far is really good, for it's conflict, drama and everything in between. It's really good and I'm enjoying it very much.

OMGGGG Sessh killlll HE her KILLLL HERRRR!O_O I really hope her girl kick his ass _**** please continue I really hope to see Sesshomaru beg to be with Kagome again an she make him pay_*** The idiiiiiooootttt

You killed her off?

fyi chapters that are just author notes aren't allowed on this site

really enjoying your story can't wait till the next one

This story is so like reality. Dad busy and Mom doing her best. If only they could have been a family, maybe in that next life.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Update

TranslatCould you please put some translation on this? I don't know what if says at the end and yes, I've tried translators, which are no help.