Reviews for Promise Me Forever |
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![]() ![]() ![]() T_T this make me cry. but is a soo good chaper |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter... though Sesshomaru was a bit too quick to anger at Kagome when I thought that they had already dealt with that and he understood that she didn't send him the pic and that she didn't want him know in the first place about their daughter. don't kill her, but keep her out of it for awhile it would teach him a good lesson. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes that way he would go through every way to try and revive her. Make him work for it, coz as far as i am concerned he doesn't appreciate her. Either that or put her in a coma for a while off course prohibiting him from taking kagome's daughter |
![]() ![]() I dont mind how short the chapters are as long as you update as often as possible. This is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chappy! Oh no! I hope your wrist gets better and soon! |
![]() ![]() Good thirteen chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too short. |
![]() ![]() ![]() next chapter please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story and I look forward to reading more. I believe you mean indebted and not indebuted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good, thx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Forgot about this story. Really hope you update more frequently. Short chapters and infrequent updates are not a good combo. This story does have a lot of potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really sorry, Not flaming at all! I love reading this fic, But the chapter is all scrunched up together and its hard to read T-T sad. oh and in the last few lines, "wouldn't never"... WOULD never? and I just learned this and thought I'd share! The Japanese language doesn't have the "L" sound so la lee loo le and lo in Japanese is actually ra ri ru re ro. so for the name milage ( If its supposed to even be Japanese I could be wrong about this whole paragraph than I'm sorry and ignore me -_-) it would be mirage (mee-rah-geh). you are very welcome to ignore me because I can see that the name now looks like mirage (illusion) But I thought that I would share. hope to see more of your chapters soon! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please... Proper spacing and paragraphing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has a lot of potential but it is kind of hard to read visually. When you change between beast and Sesshy and who is saying what, it hard to distinguish. What I seen others do is create a new paragraph when you want to distinguish each different person monologue. Again story has a lot of potential. |