Reviews for Hidden Shadows Seeking Light
Book girl fan chapter 32 . 8/19/2013
I may have been biased by other stories, but I always though Dooku left the Jedi not for power, but because he thought the Jedi were becoming corrupt, and wanted to stop that, even if he had to become corrupt himself.
Book girl fan chapter 30 . 8/19/2013
Don't do it! They would just have to kill you anyway, and that would destroy them.
Book girl fan chapter 21 . 8/19/2013
And they've just left the real Obi-Wan behind. How long will it take them to figure it out, and can Obi-Wan last that long?
Book girl fan chapter 18 . 8/19/2013
Didn't Obi-Wan say in either this book or a previous chapter that Qui-Gon has to stop calling him 'my Obi-Wan', because he gave up all rights to that? I guess Obi-Wan really does forgive too easily, especially when his Master is concerned.
Book girl fan chapter 17 . 8/19/2013
Sidious must be an incredibly talented Sith to fool Obi-Wan like that. How does he change his Force Presence? Wouldn't Obi-Wan notice the difference? They have known each other a long time, it is unusual that he could be fooled so easily.
Book girl fan chapter 16 . 8/19/2013
That was very clever of the Sith. The Jedi may not have realised for a while. He would have at leas the time it took for them to find the place, then however long it took for them to sort it out.
Book girl fan chapter 15 . 8/19/2013
Now Qui-Gon is going to feel totally awful. Yeah, he was supposed to train the Chosen One, but he gave him up!
Book girl fan chapter 14 . 8/19/2013
It's all too possible that could happen, and hopefully Obi-Wan has matured enough that it can resist.
Book girl fan chapter 12 . 8/19/2013
He's jealous. He shouldn't be, he's not admitting it to himself, but he is.
Book girl fan chapter 9 . 8/19/2013
That's why attachments are forbidden, so that Jedi can concentrate on the mission.

Isn't the rule that there can only be two Sith, Master and Apprentice?
Book girl fan chapter 8 . 8/19/2013
Anakin doesn't even seem to have noticed what happened. How is it that Obi-Wan knew of Anakin's disappearance before Qui-Gon did? Wouldn't his Master have noticed first?
Book girl fan chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
I wouldn't be surprised if Anakin tried to play Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon off of each other. If he told Qui-Gon that Obi-Wan had told him he would never be a Jedi, Qui-Gon is likely to believe it to be a misunderstanding at best, and willful maliciousness at worst. Anakin definitely has the manipulative ability to pull that off, the only question is if he thinks of it.
Book girl fan chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
Really, that was nasty. Obi-Wan was trying to point out a legitimate concern, and Qui-Gon made it personal. Then they both got into an argument. Qui-Gon is too close to this situation for him to be able to notice what is happening.
Book girl fan chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
I couldn't find Cyncial21 or her story?! Is it still on ?
MJLupin27 chapter 12 . 1/6/2013
.this! Obi and Adi are just perfect to each other, so cute!
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