Reviews for The Baby Maker
IWasBornPsycho chapter 1 . 5/4
Oh my. The ending is so... I can't even...
liveandbreathediangelo chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
I nearly died reading this- oh my sweet goodness I'm trying my hardest not to laugh because the rest of my family already thinks I'm strange enough

(but, just for the record, I don't think it's possible that Fax babies could ever be ugly)
heartofglass99 chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Lolololol XD
Fang and Max would have an awesome kid, in my opinion. Whether they were ugly or not, they'd be pretty dang awesome on the inside.
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGO chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
I can't stop laughing OMG so hilarious *insert the laughing/smiling/crying-treas-of-joy Emoji about 50 times here)
'We can't condemn some poor, innocent baby to life as an outcast' AHAHAHAHA
but in all honesty their children would be pretty adorable...
Someone chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Wait, how bad could they be?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
I literally cannot stop laughing. I mean, I thought maybe she was pregnant, or from the title, that Fang had been looking up baby names and that was freaking Max out since they were only 19 or something, but the ending totally threw me off. It's perfect! I love it!
Phantom FR3AKS chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
oh!
desperatelyobvious chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
OH MY GOD. OOOH MY GOD.

This whole time I thought it was because she found porn or something just as disturbingly incriminating (but now that you mention it, forgetting to delete your browser history is a rookie mistake). :O :O :O

To be honest, I didn't know whether to cry tears of sadness or laughter. :))))))) Like, sh*t son, that was really hilarious. Where the heck did you even get this idea? Hahahaha! But at the same time, I always imagined Max and Fang's babies cute so that's kind of a let down. :P

Sure, it was short; but it was really substantial (no unnecessary fillers and whatnot!) all throughout and everyone was suuuper in character. I'm imagining Max and Fang at 19, and it's kind of adorable that Max was thinking about that and all - having babies. I mean, she has been with her boyfriend for 5 years. :3 And like, Fang wasn't even freaked out by it.

...then again, he was probably more freaked out by their ugly babies. :)))))

Keep on keepin' on!

-Tiff
wiseyetharmless chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
...BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Dat ending tho... Oh gosh, that was hysterical.
Stariaa chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
IDK i think a Fax baby would be kinda cute
Black hair, brown eyes, a mix of pale and olive skin...the baby wouldn't be ugly.
if i were infinity chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
That's so funny and...weird? How do you even come up with this stuff? :) please write more for your other stories soon!
zoxy2 chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
i cracked up towards the end!

-Zoxy
raquelbarbosap chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Damn, I missed this!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
well thats mean
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