Reviews for Be With You
Paolina Beke H chapter 1 . 9/24
Ahahah loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
Omg I almost died when he told her she has athletes foot haha
motherbeatrice chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
loved it!
kr2009 chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
This was hilarious! I love fangirl Bella and this doctorward was definitely perfect for her. Their dialogue was so fabulous, and I loved that they were engaged at the end. Thanks for writing and good luck! :)
AnakinSmom chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Love it, I do!
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Great little fic!
Sazzledazzled chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Lol so much fun xx
jlove34 chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Oh, God. That was hilarious.
TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
shc92 chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
MTB these two are! Very fun. First laugh out loud was her inner monologue after he prescribed an anti-fungal cream for her athlete's foot (with something for odor control). The timing on many of the moments in this was awesome. This Emmett ... blech, but glad he and Rose found each other and worked. lol Good luck!
sandraev1 chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Loved it! Thanks
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
sandrai86 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Ahaha! I really loved everything about this one!
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Hey thanks for sharing this cute story!

I love the Star Wars theme!

Good luck in the contest

Chilly x
Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
OH MY GOD, you are a comedy GENIUS!

This. Is. AMAZING!

I haven't laughed like that in ages! I mean full on belly laughs with the odd cackle thrown in!

I loved her inner monologue well actually I just loved her & her naïveté. So funny.

'I don't reply; I'm too busy staring. How I wish I could use The Force right now. I'd make him do something really dirty.'

Loved this part. I'm just gonna go back and re read.

I'm wishing you the very best of luck! Genius.

Erron xoxo
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