|Reviews for Indelible|
| b0ldPhoenix chapter 21 . 4h
Oh... It has been ages since I haven't checked fanfiction... and I mean at least a couple of years. But today I was cleaning my warderobe and my e-mail and I came across a familiar name... That was a few hours , 21 chapters, a bottle of wine ago... and I hadn't realised how much I've been missing you...
Another brilliant idea, witty comments and fast flowing but in-depth plot and all too human characters... great job! And btw ... I am kinda upset that I don't get to read the whole story, even though I like the wait and trill when there is a new chapter... preferably twice a day :-)
I am sure you know how awesome you are, so on to the point... I tend to be kinda nosey,let's say so...
Bella needs vacation! But let's take it slow, probably... a radio show for her books. That way she can still be anonymous, visit Edward and MasenAnd , preferably around the prom and it would be work related(or something like that), so there is less pressure on their relationship. And you are a good writer and you like to keep your readers pleased, so I am sure it would be a great read. Long story short, I propose Bella wins an award! In Chicago... (puppy dog's eyes)
And... where is everyone? Seriously, Bella needs to go shopping... and the way I see it, a killer dress is in order. And who would pick a better dress than Alice? :-) I miss her... She adds something mischievous to even regular activities.
Time to stop now, because I might be getting overboard with all the ideas and suggestions ... but I will definitely check my mail for the next chapter daily. Hugs, kisses and wishful looks for the sunny rocky isolated dreamy beach...
| tammyxxx chapter 21 . 5/23
i reallly love this story so far. can't wait to see where this is going for them
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/22
I am in love with Masen.
| Estela chapter 21 . 5/15
I'm a new reader and I must say: Congratulations on your story! What an amazing plot twist with the beginning. I love Masen! I love how real you made them to be and how coherent the characters are.
Do you have a schedule for posting?
Also, I'm brazilian so forgive me any mistakes :)
| flojo03 chapter 21 . 5/15
what a great outing they are having together and I do think mason is orchestrating things, he is happy to see his dad happy I would say
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| Nissa-Cullen chapter 21 . 5/11
Since when is 70 degrees beach weather?! I'm sorry but it's got to be at least 95 to 100 for me to be able to enjoy it. Lol. They're braver then I am. So Edward knows about Bella's books. I'd be a title embarrassed too.
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