Reviews for The Exiles Return- revised
Nikon Shadeslayer chapter 2 . 11/13/2014
Update your shit man
TheChickWithTheAwesomeUsername chapter 2 . 9/20/2014
Translation:
Poseidon: oh, you lost the fight? Here, have a mega load of power and a deadly weapon that could potentially kill, oh I don't know, a certain God of heroes called, I don't know, Josh?
Percy: thanks! (Turns around and completely forgets about Josh)
Poseidon: (face palm) I don't even know why I bother.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/18/2014
Percy's brother would not have more authority than both Poseidon and Zeus, the latter being the king of the gods and the former being one of the big three. It just wouldn't happen. You need a beta.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/22/2014
There are some giant holes in the story, you should make a prologue to explain them early on, but ask the readers exactly what is missing as I cannot be bothered to think of them.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
I think I am going to write 15 reviews
guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Hi this is amazing! Update. Now.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Update. Now.
MadAsBookWorm chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Love it so far dude. Keep at it :D