Reviews for Firsts
another.creative.lover chapter 5 . 11/13/2016
another.creative.lover chapter 4 . 11/13/2016
This chapter made me smile like a stupid idiot. I really empathize with Juvia and her tendency to catastrophize and blow everything out of proportion and worry, and the way that she was so proud and worried about what Gray thought about her Gray doll collection was just so sweet and adorable.
And it felt that way because you have this ability to really let us see Juvia the way Gray would without outright being like yeah he thought she was super cool outright.

Much talent. Woow.
another.creative.lover chapter 3 . 11/13/2016
Of course the dumb turd chokes on frigging spaghetti. And gets flustered after juvia's romantic remarks.
He's too cute.
And Juvia! Ahhhhh, WAYYYY TOO CUTE!
another.creative.lover chapter 2 . 11/13/2016
Kill me, Gray you're way too slick for your own good. Hold both of her hands while you're at it!
another.creative.lover chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
The best thing about your stories are that, even in the smallest amount of words, you can still capture the essence of the characters. Gray is such a wonderful awkward tsundere, and his dual gruffness and kindness are really hard to capture. But you do it wonderfully.
aymeria chapter 8 . 9/7/2016
Wonderful stories that I find myself reading again and again. Miss your writing!
SHELBANG chapter 4 . 5/28/2016
Alli chapter 10 . 1/11/2016
This is me. I am Juvia in this senario
thatotakuqueen chapter 13 . 3/23/2015
Goddess Char chapter 13 . 3/20/2015
I loved it so much! That was amazing (and I know I'm a little late with reading this but oh well)! Every time I read fics when he proposes, I get super happy and pumped up, but now I'm fangirling so hard! Even though he didn't give her a ring or anything and the scene wasn't as romantic as Gray intended it to be, it was enough for me and YAS!, gosh dang it I love when he proposes to her, especially when his proposal follows after a cute little bunch of chapters like these! This whole little set was wonderful, funny, and unleashed a flurry of happy emotions inside of me. I love your style of writing and your ideas, and you rock, please never stop writing because your fics (even if some of them are not really appropriate for most people, XP) need to be read world wide! You may call me crazy, but I'm serious, I loved this so much and the fact that Gruvia is my OTP made it even better! Woo hoo!
Goddess Char chapter 10 . 3/20/2015
Oh my gosh, I died laughing at this one! Juvia's reaction to seeing a spider is exactly my reaction (well, minus the whole magic power thing), that was super funny, you really did a fantastic job with this chapter. Lol, that was too funny! XD Unison Raid, Gray-sama! Hahaha, I just calmed down and now I'm gonna start laughing again! XD
Goddess Char chapter 9 . 3/20/2015
This little bunch of chapters for Gruvia week is so far so adorable! First time falling asleep together on Juvia's birthday (even though she totally misinterpreted what he meant)! Gah, so kawaii!
Goddess Char chapter 8 . 3/20/2015
Aww, first pocky kiss! Kawaii!
Goddess Char chapter 6 . 3/20/2015
Lol that was too funny! Juvia wearing such exploiting swimsuits that she had caused men to gather around her and Gray has to be the one to chase them off! Hahahahahaha! I loved it, and it was very kawaii!
Goddess Char chapter 4 . 3/20/2015
Kawaii! Juvia has 205 little plushies of her beloved Gray-sama, and 206 if she counts him! So adorable! .
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