|Reviews for Frantic First of July|
| DAngel7 chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
I enjoyed the one shot, but as I saw you mentioned it Is a bit confusing as I haven't read the other one-shots connected with it. I do think that it would be better if all the shots were under the same story, or you should of given a thought/flashback about what happened roughly between them so reader is not left confused about it (of its a one shot it should have the complete feeling to it, and then we can still go and read the detainers version of why happened in the other one shot.. but that's just my opinion.
I did enjoy the story, and I hope you continue to write more.
| crimsonkira chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
omfg dudee! I was definitely NOT expecting that. holy shiett
| Megingjoro chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
This is...a really cool fic.
I have immense respect for you. I mean, creating a fic of THIS magnitude and managing to make it so detailed and yet so witty is no small feat.
If there's one thing I really think would be great (please, this is just a whimsical suggestion there is no need to follow it) if all the chapters for this series were compiled into one fic. It's a bit hard keeping track of when it's updated because it's not in one place. And with all the mail one gets from fanfic, even the 'follow' button for authors is difficult to actually follow...
Do ignore me if I'm not making sense. Am a tad but tired. :P
Official fanfic account: aryaputra
(becoz I'm a lazy ass who rarely logs in so if you would like to PM me, please feel free to the account mentioned)
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Wha..? Why did?
That was a very good read, but you honestly threw me off when you killed Asuma-sensei.. does this mean we might expect deaths similar to canon? Oh noes!
Anyway.. what was Itachi doing? LOL, the panting and blowing off his little brother sort of makes me want to think something naughty..
Hmm.. curious though, considering how Naruto and Sasuke often remark on how 'attentive' Neji and Itachi are to their younger siblings.. None of those big brothers showed their distinguishable traits. XD
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
I love this series you got going! How often do you post them? Keep up the great work!
| BlackPhoenix279 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
I can't wait to read the next one!
| Lowism chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
Ok the sudden bombings had managed to bring the story into another climax, hopefully we know what's happening. Seems like it concernS sasuke since itachi asked him to be careful. Looking forward to the next story!
| 921350 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Yay another update! I look forward to your one shots on this series. But i gotta say the ending on this one shot was such a tragic! Everything was going good with Sasuke because Hinata accepted him back into her arms and bam! Asuma die! Very bittersweet...I wonder what's going to happen next chapter, you've mention Sasuke's birthday...so hopefully that chapter won't be too heartbreaking. I hope Shikamaru's fine, he's one of my favorite character I like to write as a side character. His persona and everything about him is just wow. Anyway great chapter, gave a lot of insights to different characters, I learned more things bout Naruto on this chapter regarding his feelings for Sakura which is so heart breaking, but in actuality I can see him like that in the manga/anime due to his character...but that was sweet of him to consider things like that and then Itachi! What was he doing? What does he work as? Is he really going to a university? Oh he's such a mystery just like Gaara though Gaara's side of the story was sort of explain on this chapter though I will like to learn more. Overall I'm excited for the next chapter, update soon
| rainbowxpersonality chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
EXPECTED THIS TO BE A ONE SHOT. EXPECTED THE EXPLOSION TO BE PEOPLE BEING ANGRY OR SOMETHING. WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT. WILL TUNE IN FOR MORE. WELL DONE. -clutches at my racing heart-
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
More of Sasuke and Hinata! :D
| Aaaauuuugggghhhh chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
I was loving this chapter and then WHAM! Dramatic ending! Holy frick on a stick what just happened?!
Loved the SasuHina interactions and Naruto's surprising insights. The moment with Denka outside the convenience store. And Gaara with practice hugs. D'awww...
But then going back to the end... Itachi's involved, isn't he? Why else would you include the earlier phone call... AAUUGGHH THE SUSPENSE! IT'S TOO GREAT... I need a chill pill!
| ninjaluver chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Ahhhh! I'm so Happy! I've been waiting for this since the last oneshot! XD I love how you made sasuke work to prove himself but have naruto remind him that it was up to hinata on whether she wanted him back. Everything just fit together so perfectly. The ending was a little surprising but I want to see where it goes. I love your stories! Can't wait for the next one!
| Yazie567 chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
You messed with my feels. Crap went down in the end. This is well written I loved the dancing bit. Please update soon.
| Sheep-san chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
So good. More please.