FFS update!

Anything in particular I'd like to see?
How about a new chapter? That'd be nice.

Oh well!
No doubt she's kept herself a sacrificial virgin to lay at the alter of St Edward.
Don't they always?

This seems great so far, I'm excited for more:)

Not so bad what happened between them. He chose to stop presueing her, which actually is very mature of him. Throughout reading this story, it seemed as if he had done something horrible to her. But in truth he didn't. The story built me up to expect some terrible heart break, but ended up falling sort. Which is fine, if this story has low angst. Just thought it was going to be something much more devastating. Thanks for sharing.

So E asked Jacob to date her? And how far did they get, physically?

Good. Can't wait to know what he did.

Good.

Good. I wonder how bad he treated her.

Great update.

um, she was 12 and he.. what? 15? that's kinda nasty, and simply not ok. he was a teenager already. she just a little girl. him kissing her is all kinds of wrong. i'm not even sure if it is legal to kiss her at that age. ewww.

So that gives us a little bit of insight in to their history..
Loved the update, can't wait for more.

Sometimes words get confusing or misinterpret- like when Alice said He brought a girl on the first chapter, then Edward ignoring Bella at dinner but then chapter three- he suddenly got conscience or felt guilty and tried to explain about the Lauren that she was not invited. So what exactly does Edward wants? and why Alice said the he brought a girl if she came uninvited? And he ignored Bella all that time when Lauren was there? I f I were Bella I will ignore him and let him suffer a bit...

Loved it!

Interesting, update soon xx