I feel like my genuine response to every part of this is, '...I don't even...' and I also feel like that is a correct response lol. As intended. I thought the narrator was Discord at first, too, because it made sense at the time and now it doesn't. Which is also good.

You should write a sequel like... what happened when Cheese Sandwich left PonyVille and encountered Discord again.

Awesome! My two favorite characters in one story! Great job! :D

I thought they were going to start arguing or whatever xD

I loved this story! I couldn't stop smiling as I read it!

Your narration with Weird A-Cheese Sandwich is...weird. I mean, its definitely a good thing that you can change your narration styles to fit with different characters, but...I dunno...there's something...off about this story. *squints suspiciously at it*

Maybe its the way you spoiled the entire episode in Cheese's musings, when Cheese (and everypony else) was rather obviously completely surprised to realize that Pinkie saw another party planner as a threat instead of a new friend.

Or maybe its the boringly obvious nature of everypony's names. Unless that's meta commentary on how pony names are (at least tangentially) related to their cutie marks/talents and Cheese Sandwich's isn't? Of course, the narration itself turns obvious things into jokes too, like the beating heart and the overly long gag about Discord drinking the glass. At least the milk didn't explode this time. Guess that reformation's sticking. ;)

Apples in the desert! *facehoof* Of course its Cheese Sandwich who notices. :D

And you poked your chaos pony theory again. ;)

All though I suppose this fic does explain why he didn't go all fanboy on Pinkie the first time he saw her. Though if his fanboy moments had been as cute yet overly literal as these, its a shame he didn't. XD

Overly literal! That's what's irking me about this narration: its overly literal! Every little detail is picked apart. But you made it amusing...so...its a complaint...that I sorta mean and sorta don't mean...? *scratches head* I'm gonna change the subject now.

The stand of Discord-shaped lamps in "Trade Ya"! Does Discord have a fanpony? Did he pose for those? Or is it some kinda celebrity thing and we just didn't see the Celestia/Luna/Cadance immortalized as objects stall(s)? :P

This is really well-written and I love the writing style. It feels almost like a missing scene from "Pinkie Pride." I would've thought that Cheese Sandwich and Saloon Keeper would be more surprised/alarmed to see Discord, but maybe Cheese was THAT invested in his Eastwood persona.

I liked this. You're very good at descriptions and Cheese Sandwich's inner voice. And you got Discord's character down pretty well. Good job!