This was a fun chapter even if, as Fluttershy so eloquently puts it, Discord spends the chapter torturing himself with brief breaks for letter writing (magically dictating? he struggles with reading, so how much easier is writing?) and trolling Luna, but mostly just tormenting himself. And ignoring what their letters were saying. And tormenting himself some more.

Oh noes! MOON 1! Hopefully Moon 2 involves that portal option and not more letters cuz he's not taking to heart what those letters are saying to him.

And, wow, two updates in a row to this story? *huggles you*

Sheesh, this chapter was sad. He could not catch a break this time.

Except for Derpy. *hugs Derpy*

Even that made him feel bad though, cuz he didn't feel he deserved such easy forgiveness. lol The pegasus alarm doesn't work on Derpy. Nothing works for Derpy. He should get to know her.

That moon ecosystem sounds awesome and pretty! Wait, which side of the moon is he on? Can it be seen with a telescope?

Wow, three story updates practically on top of eachother? You're the best!

Though this one was a little shorter and more a glimpse into Discord's psyche than anything...oh, Discord, egging on your own competition *is* funny. Now, if you had turned them all into screech owls, or unleashed a tornado, or egged them on until they'd attacked you and then done something else along those lines,*then* Fluttershy'd be mad at you.

Though it sounds like he enjoyed screwing around with them too much to accidentally or on purpose convince them to do something that he'd actually have to put a stop to.

I wonder if he's just too depressed to see that or if that's what he'd believe even if he was feeling more...stable...? "Light Rain" isn't part of this continuity,

Thanks for the update! MustnotpleadforElementsofOppositionupdatemustnot- Update "Not the Hero" soon please!

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I'm more of a casual MLP fan, and haven't watched the show in awhile due to spending time in other fandoms, but I love your Discord stories! He's my favorite character in the show, and a big reason why I became a fan at all. He's just so complex but enjoyable and fun to watch. You write him very well, not just a villain nor someone who is completely good, which is like a breath of fresh air :)

It isn't easy being Chaotic Neutral when you want to be Chaotic Good, but you know that you could easily swing back to being Chaotic Evil whenever you least expect it because... Chaos. Nice work.

More of a moving-the-story-forward chapter, than a things-happened-here chapter, but still interesting.

Always fun to see you/Discord philosophize. Or whatever the correct word is. XP

I'd say I can't wait for the update, but you have so many awesome stories running! They all deserve updates!

Well, somepony has issues...:S

;D -J

Another marvelous chapter! And Rainbow's not being a jerk for once! That was fun.

Great job with this chapter! :D

Yesss this is so spectacular! You're exceptionally skilled at showing Discord handling all his emotions without it being out of character. Honestly, after the new episode, I think I really like the way everyone reacted to Twilight loosing her home much better in your story than in the actual show. Props for quality characterization!

There's a lot of detail going into Discord's mind. And I like it. It drags on a little bit though, but it's still fine.

I wish I could read more of this, it's interesting.

Ah, shoot now I'm really curious about Mayhem. Were you planning on writing about him at all? Wow, I always love Discord's monologues. They're just so great to read! You're very skilled at describing a fully fleshed out universe in a few words.

This chapter seemed a bit rambling, though it was fun to get more hints about the previous Chaos Avatars, and then you punched us in the face with that delightfully ominous final line.