Reviews for Betrayal Brings Out the Best in Us
POK3MON-MAST3R101 chapter 43 . 9/30
Great story I've read it from beginning to the end hope to see more chapters for this story
InfernapeUser14 chapter 43 . 9/28
Is Serena gonna be in the harem
steven80112 chapter 43 . 9/27
Please update the next chapter I love this story
jordanlink7856 chapter 1 . 9/24
Not an insult to you or your story by any means, just simply wondering what exactly people see in Betrayal fics on the Pokémon side of things.
LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 34 . 9/23
...ooh I wonder who the last one is.
KitkatMoon chapter 43 . 9/20
cool story
Aurawing chapter 43 . 9/17
"Goodbye money, I'll miss you..." - Every boyfriend in the history of shopping ever
LEGAL-EAGLE53 chapter 33 . 9/17
That's nice of Roxie to offer to teach Ash to play the guitar. Is Skyla still in the same outfit?
Gabe chapter 43 . 9/14
In all honesty i thought that this was going to be really bad, but i was compleatly wrong! Im just counting on you not abandoning this story and realeasing chapter 44 real soon because this is hands doen the best thing i have read on this website.
Lame name 987 chapter 43 . 9/7
Amazing chap can you add the ash-greninja formation and what is your shcedule? (sorry me not know how to spell)
ash chapter 43 . 9/5
Please continue
AzureSoulReaper chapter 43 . 9/4
very nicely done i eagerly await more
AzureSoulReaper chapter 42 . 9/4
very nice story and battles. by the way how far along is hildas lemon?
the creed's legion chapter 43 . 9/2
lol great chap I was half expecting to see blastoise become incinerated by a thunder attack but this works too
Falcon800 chapter 37 . 8/30
Poor eevee
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