|Reviews for Betrayal Brings Out the Best in Us|
| Tychon chapter 2 . 7/21
Damn. Poor Cilan. I felt so bad for him in the confession scene.
| Blackcharizard62 chapter 45 . 7/15
Awesome story keep up the good work!
| Guest chapter 45 . 7/14
Please. More of this! Hope you'll update soon! Good Job
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14
Will there be other girls that will be interested in ash and join the hearm and I get your busy and all but can we please have the next chapter soon it's been a while and we're ready for a new chapter for a while and this story is really good and interesting
| masterart chapter 45 . 7/13
when you gonna update chapter on?
| PhotonDragon16 chapter 45 . 6/28
Is this story dead or not?
| AriaAxo chapter 1 . 6/27
Note: Fire is effective against electric. Also, why can't you add Misty or something why's Hilda there she's a manga and game exclusive character I'm just wondering :/
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/13
is gardenia joining the harem
| Random chapter 2 . 6/9
You know, I really want to read this because I've read a few of your other fics...
But the formatting makes it frustrating to attempt reading it. I guess the first few chapters is a mark that really show your progression as a writer over the years.
Can you spare some time to edit and proofread this story? I honestly can't read this if the beginning is this messy.
| Some person chapter 45 . 6/8
Are you going to lemon for roxie
| NC Blueryu chapter 45 . 6/5
Hello, this is NC Blueryu. I've just recently started writing on this site, but I've been reading this fic for a while. I must say I enjoy it vvery much. I do have a few ideas that may come in handy. Let Ash get a few Pokemon he hasn't caught in that type. Give Flannery and Iris a Charmander.
| Guest chapter 45 . 6/2
Sorry to complain about updates it's just that I actually can't wait for ash to fight misty and I know that's just going to be funny as fuck
| GG chapter 45 . 5/31
I'm really enjoying your stories. Really like your pokemon and fairy tail ones. Have you ever thought about doing a digimon story maybe by itself or a crossover ?
| Guest chapter 45 . 5/30
| Star's Keyblade4114 chapter 45 . 5/31
is this story still going on ?