Reviews for Mastermind
resaw chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Jeff?! Nice build up of tension as the thin man approached the Master. I wasn't aware of the genre of "drabble" until now, but this is a nice little fun piece. These days, though, when I hear the expression, "Dammit," I think Jack Bauer, and if the thin man had been a woman, it could have been "Dammit, Chloe."

My imagination's running away on me... Thank you for a fun little piece.
vandevere chapter 1 . 5/13/2014 *THAT'S* interesting...

Hope there's going to be more...
2old2write chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Jeff? BuyMoron Jeff?

I guess that's the ultimate twist.

And now where does the Master turn? What does he have in mind for the Bartowski's?
phnxgrl chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
I love it! Jeff Barnes the major screw up of Buy More fame is the criminal mastermind! LOL! Kudos on a great cover villain. No one would ever suspect the burn out Apple hack was the one behind it all.
wilf21 chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Ha! Great. I always thought there was something more to Jeff ;)