Reviews for Sparkling Fire and Smokey Sighs |
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![]() ![]() ![]() deserved the award! this was a great read from start to finish! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goddamn this was a great fic to read. You're a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing this with us. I'm about to check out your profile to see any other of your works. I hope you still write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wheeewwwww that was one hellova chapter! I am hooked on this already. You have incredible writing skills and plot, my friend. Simply: awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was a little, anticlimactic. I was hoping for more, to be said, regarding their feelings toward each other. Otherwise great fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good fic overall. It will not be added to my favorites, but I did enjoy it. Yes, it was a litt chaotic at times, but you should give yourself more credit, this was well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() They FINALLY jumped in! And I love that they were both virgins! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kimberly is quite evil actually. I kinda figured it was just a ploy, but I appear to be mistaken |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, I would’ve assumed that Ron would’ve been 100% against Kim. Glad I was wrong! And I have a sneaking suspicions that the leaders of the UN are actually lowardians in disguise. Like how nick fury and Marie hill are actually Skrulls in Spider-Man far from home. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m really loooking forward to this! Kim rescuing shego from being executed, and being labels as a traitor herself. A new direct fir the KiGo franchise! |
![]() ![]() Slow burn? Almost no burn... But better than the instant love you find elsewhere. |
![]() ![]() The gendering in french is a pain. English has lots of faults as well. Born in usa, I almost failed "english", there are way too many exceptions to way too many rules. I like math, it is simple, no fuzzy rules. |
![]() ![]() Actually my gripe is Ron is Not awesome. He is comic relief, stupid luck, and a case of tearing down males to make females look good. Ron is possibly better than the bimbos in need of rescuing found in earlier literature. Maybe... Perhaps not... The molerat often seems smarter then the man. |
![]() ![]() Oh! Has anyone done a Kim Possible/Cthulhu xover? She would want Shego as a teammate, the nameless horrors H. P. Lovecraft wrote about are not pushovers. |
![]() ![]() This story started off so strong and then just becomes an incoherent mess. It's a shame really. |
![]() ![]() Gah! I absolutely loved this! Great story and great writing. I love how you didn’t force Shego and Kim’s characters together and let their trust and care for one another build organically. |