Reviews for A mother's touch
Athena Hirdman chapter 22 . 9/16
I love this story please keep writing chapters
iacopo.passerini chapter 1 . 2/6
Ah molto bella questa storia!
Complimenti ottima storia!
Guest chapter 22 . 12/12/2021
Please ignore the Super Haters.

Also please rewrite or expand on your story just to get people more familiar you should have fixed up.

Reality. Gine should be Stronger then King Piccolo.. however you should still write work go to should not be sized line and should sit still maintain his development

If anything have Gine stop iterference of king Piccolo from using Tien as Hostage

Addition.. With Gine insistence Chi Chi Remains Active Fighter
christopherhrdz06 chapter 8 . 7/15/2021
it's Kame Island it means turtle
Miram the dark chapter 22 . 5/26/2021
Thank for such a story it is really god to see some one who thinks about gine like I did I am happy I actually fell on your story accidentally and I wasn't disappointed but if you allow me I would like to suggest to make bardock flash backs when goku is fighting king piccolo and that gine sees more bardock in him at that moment it would be perfect and thanks for reading my comment and thanks even if you didn't read but let me be honest your story is the coolest one I read on this site so far I would like to ask if Toma Wil get revived he has so much potential as a character and what about raditz oh sorry I began asking lots of questions it is just so exciting
Maritza92 chapter 22 . 4/8/2021
are you ever going to finish this story, I recently found this story and would love to see how it is different from the original story.
Scissors Dolphin chapter 1 . 7/23/2020
Work on your English.
asim.rockstar chapter 22 . 4/12/2020
Please update the story
MDRSB chapter 1 . 3/19/2020
I like the story but what’s up w the power levels, it’s confusing
Chris chapter 22 . 2/28/2020
Please continue this story it’s great
bcmorgan96 chapter 22 . 10/8/2019
Is this story discontinued?
Ilireanwri chapter 9 . 8/21/2019
Hmm, this chapter reminds that I always loved the early Dragonball chapters especially the training with Muten Roshi and the tournament. Say about Roshi what you want; despite being a massive pervert with some very strange and/or extreme methods he knows how to train others and once getting serious actually keeps his head on the job.
Guest chapter 22 . 5/27/2019
Are you EVER going to continue?
Jake the Mystery chapter 22 . 5/18/2019
Please Continue This I Know Its Been Like 3 or 4 Years But I Enjoyed Reading Up To This Point
Jake the Mystery Signing Off
For Now ;)
AlwaysItachi chapter 1 . 3/25/2019
What's the point of reading this fanfic it's basically a copy paste of the original story with a little bit of creativity. got quite bored actually.
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