|Reviews for A mother's touch|
| Neo-Devil chapter 7 . 11/22/2017
female saiyans can attain super saiyan. 'looks at Caulifa and Kale' it is confirmed! The reason why we never saw one until that tourney was because the only pureblood saiyans that were alive at that point were all male.
| Uzumaki Shadowfox chapter 21 . 10/17/2017
please continue and complete this fanfic series
| BossViper28 chapter 1 . 9/8/2017
Just the Beginning and it Really Good
| Rick sword fire chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
I probably two years too late but I really enjoyed this fanfic and hope you continue with it.
| super sayiman chapter 2 . 8/29/2017
Really good story.
| Leorus chapter 22 . 7/5/2017
This fanfic is awesome
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
Can somebody adopt this awesome story. Please
| Warmachine375 chapter 22 . 6/11/2017
What an interesting DBZ AU story about Bardock sending his wife Gine with their son Goku/Kakarrot to Earth for their safety and the mother of Universe 7's greatest hero embarks on a journey with her baby boy around the world similar to the original Dragon Ball storyline. And I love it!
I always wonder why Bardock didn't do that in the canon since he's the only high-leveled Saiyan outside the elites and Gine and their son are the lowest Saiyans around.
In canon, Gine once suggested that they should go to Earth together but her husband shot the idea down because they would be tracked down by Frieza's men with their Scouters and their efforts will be in vain and pointless.
It's good to see about Gine's backstory and how she was an outcast among the Saiyan race because of her kind-hearted nature and meeting Bardock as a kid. Poor Gine, she finds befriending boys much easier than girls because most of them are alpha bitches.
And poor Gine also when Master Roshi is around during her training with him. Hehehe. Don't worry he may be an idiotic pervert but he's a good guy. He just want a good look at your hot young body even after being a mom to Goku. XP
At least you have Launch there to be your friend and keep Roshi in check lol.
It's nice Gine saw Krillin like another son to her and he and Goku are best friends. :D
She even took Son as her surname to honor Grandpa Gohan and called her son Goku instead of Kakarrot only when she asserts her authority as his mother if he did something stupid and disobeying her.
What happened to the Scouters of Gine and Fasha? They could be used by Bulma for better use and also their space pods for traveling to Namek too as well.
Will Gine and Fasha wear their old armor back? Sure they don't want to associate their old lives with it but even they can't discard their heritage so easily but will reclaim it on their own terms. Plus their armor is suited to handle their Oozaru transformations where their clothes would rip into pieces of fabric like tissue paper. Wouldn't mind the fanservice though. Just Saiyan. XD
Hope they keep their tails, including Goku, Chi-Chi and their son Gohan too as well. Even if they're cut off to protect them from transforming at the full moon or the Blutz Wave artificial moon.
Does Gine, Fasha and Chi-Chi have the potential to become Super Saiyans? Because that'd be awesome.
Quite an interesting plot twist of Chi-Chi being a Saiyan hybrid with a tail and her mother turned out to be Fasha from Bardock's team who survived the ambush by Frieza's lackeys and went to Earth after Planet Vegeta's destruction where she met the Ox-King and mellowed out into a kind yet still fiercely protective woman.
Fasha is such a textbook definition of tsundere. XD Guess her time on Earth had really changed her for the better with a new life and family.
If Bardock or any of his old teammates saw Fasha now, they'll never live it down and enjoy teasing her much to her tsundere fury. Poor girl. Hehehe
Guess Gine's grandson Gohan will be much more powerful than his canon counterpart. With his parents being a full-blooded and half-hybrid Saiyans respectively. Same goes for Goten too as well.
By the time of the Saiyan Saga, the Saiyan mothers and their children should be strong enough after training for years since the original DB storyline to beat back Raditz and later Vegeta and Nappa. Albeit with some difficulty but still win.
Perhaps Gine will put her eldest son Raditz in his place and keep him at his best behavior to bond and reconcile with Goku and be part of the family. She won't be amused of his attitude at all and give him a good smacking and an ear-grabbing.
And also probably save Nappa from being blown up by Vegeta for failing him. The poor guy doesn't deserve to be treated like that and being with Goku who would love to have a new friend and sparring partner might be a better reward.
I wonder how would Gine react to Piccolo in first meeting. Although she doesn't know him as a Namekian yet but Fasha does I think, the mother of Goku won't be amused if the Demon King basically kidnapped her grandson to train under him for a year to get ready for Vegeta and Nappa's arrival to Earth even if it's for the greater good and a necessary evil. Although Gine will warm up to him after realizing he's not as evil as others thought him to be, and Gohan looked up to him as a second father who has tough love for him.
And as for the Namek Saga, I'm sure you'll make things interesting with Gine, Fasha and Chi-Chi going with Bulma, Gohan and Krillin in searching for the Dragon Balls to revive their friends and fight Frieza's top men until witnessing Goku going Super Saiyan for the first time and beating Frieza's ass.
I dunno about the Android and Cell Games Sagas though if you want to go through it. Except for the Buu Saga.
As for the Red Ribbon Army Saga recently, it'll be interesting to see how Gine and her son Goku would do during that arc. Even at their lowest Power Levels, the Saiyan mother and son can easily demolish an entire army by themselves if they wanted to and would do in self-defense.
And then no one in Red Ribbon is dumb enough to attack the Ox-Kingdom or else Fasha will destroy them all if she really wanted to. All they need to do is threaten her daughter Chi-Chi and we get the ruthless Saiyan woman from Bardock's team we know of on a rampage at them. There you have it.
It'd be fun to look forward of Gine meeting Android 8 who doesn't want to fight like her as kindred spirits. She could convince him in their conversation that it's true that kind people like herself and 8 don't want to fight for the sake of fighting, they must fight for the ones they care for and win.
What will happen to Dr. Gero there? Considering he held a petty grudge against Goku for destroying the army he worked there in canon and built the Androids to kill him although in TFS gives a deeper meaning, showing his son, which Android 16 was based from, was killed by young Goku with his Kamehameha as collateral damage during the base attack.
Will Gine avert that from happening? Last thing she need is a bitter old man wanting revenge on her son no matter what it takes and would kill anyone who gets in his way including her.
Maybe save the life of Gero's son and bring him back to the doctor which is most appreciated or/and even tell Bulma to give him a job at Capsule Corporation so he can use his genius intellect and ideas to benefit mankind in a positive way than waste his whole life trying to kill Goku over a petty grudge.
Heck, he could even build the Androids to defend Earth from threats and be allies with the Z-Fighters.
Anyways, it is an awesome story and I'm looking forward for the next update in the future. Faved and Followed! :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/8/2017
Chi-Chi's Fan update this story! it is the best story there is.
| Mr.Green37 chapter 5 . 5/17/2017
And to think Yamcha at one point could take on Goku.
| Mr.Green37 chapter 4 . 5/17/2017
I've gotta say I'm liking the story so far.
| super sayiman chapter 22 . 3/20/2017
| super sayiman chapter 22 . 3/18/2017
please update again.
| super sayiman chapter 1 . 3/10/2017
I am waiting for an update please
| super sayiman chapter 22 . 3/10/2017
When will you ever update this story again