Reviews for A mother's touch
AC1252 chapter 22 . 2/19/2017
Will you ever update this story again? I really want to see of this. I hope you update again someday.
Diclonious57 chapter 22 . 1/13/2017
*sigh* I wanna a update
Diclonious57 chapter 10 . 1/12/2017
Have you seen dbz abridged?
maoazura chapter 2 . 1/2/2017
Really your dumm why would gohan give him a new name when he already has one you should change it back to kakorot cause gohan is just intruding he don't have the right to rename him not with his mother there. And not after hearing his name if you wanted to call him goku you should have just made him come to earth by himself
Guest chapter 22 . 12/24/2016
Give me more chapters! Please
Darkjaden chapter 22 . 12/17/2016
Is Goku going to be stronger than his canon counterpart when Radditz arrive?
Bobo the unicorn chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
why has there' not been any updates?
Darkpheniox chapter 11 . 11/10/2016
This is so good wonder if the author will ever update if not some should take over or adopte it. Anyway hope to see more.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/9/2016
I don't know why Trunks x pan is a thing is what like 9 in gt and Trunks is 23 how can anyone in good Conscience allow that.
StarwindX chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
I like these type of stories but I'm always dubious as most keep the same plot the same with no ripples/changes.

Either way, will read this tomorrow and looking forward to it. :)
Guest chapter 22 . 10/16/2016
I really love this story!
Please update soon, I want to know what happens next!
Guest chapter 22 . 9/25/2016
You watched Dragon ball Super Episode 59...This definitely shows how vast the gap in power between Goku and Beerus are.

Present Zamusu is somewhat on par with Demi God Goku in his Super Saiyan 2 Form.

And look what Beerus did to Zamasu... Lol

Beerus in the Anime is more like 100.. Not a 10. Lol

The Manga also implied that Super Saiyan Blue is 10 times stronger then the Red God Form/Saiyan God Mode.

The Red Form is simply Base Form with Godly Ki...

I feel we can better understand Dragon ball Super by By Reading the manga and watching the Anime..

The Anime and Manga are both different in way
Ryan L. Spradling chapter 1 . 9/10/2016
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STOP! Once you're reading this, you CAN'T go back.
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Mabel Pines will now come inside your house and fart rainbows form her head onto your face. she will then stuff your face with hyper realistic candy, causing your anus to explode.
to prevent this from happening, copy and paste this into 10 different gravity fall plz accounts, or she'll get you at 4:20 AM
Miranda chapter 22 . 8/5/2016
Don't know if your still doing this, but I hope you are.

As for one of the movies that you could do, I would like to recommend my favorite The Worlds Strongest. Only at the end, Dr. Wheelo could survive to redeem himself.
MalachitePeridot chapter 22 . 7/14/2016
I gotta say, this might just be the most original adaptation of Dragon Ball I've ever read.

Over the years I've read several stories like this where Bardock or Raditz come to Earth to reunite with Gôku when he was a kid.

I even read a story once where Vegeta, Nappa, Raditz, and Goku himself, or Kakarot as he called himself, come to Earth to collect the Dragon Balls and end up kidnapping Bulma while she was on her adventure of finding them.

But this might very well be the first ever story where Gine comes to Earth. At least it's the first I've ever seen.

I always did think Gine would've been a pretty interesting character if she'd been introduced into the series.

I have a few suggestions for how you may continue the story if you don't mind regarding Ranfan. Now before I start, I'd like to say that I did get the initial idea of this from another story called Familial Rejection by Yaji's Girl who's an amazing author by the way. I'd seriously recommend reading some of her work. And after reading it, it actually made quite a bit of sense.

Basically, Ranfan and Colonel Violet, yes that Colonel Violet!, are cousins. And their great-grandmother was Fanfan. Their great-grandfather remains uncertain but it was definitely implied that it might've been none other than Master Roshi! Who, at least at that point, had remained unaware that he had any children, let alone grandchildren.

Given that you've already covered a fair bit of Dragon Ball already, I assume that you probably already know who Colonel Violet and Fanfan are, but in case you don't, I'll be sure to send more information later.

The reason I think this should be incorporated is frankly because I liked that story so much. Plus as I said above, it actually does make a lot of sense. I always thought that Fanfan and Ranfan looked way too similar for it to be a coincidence. And as for Colonel Violet... Well, she's a total badass. The only CONFIRMED female member of the Red Ribbon Army and one of the few, if not the only known member, to escape without dying or getting locked up. Dr. Hero doesn't count since he did end up dying, twice.

This brings me to my second suggestion. Colonel Violet/Hasky. Now before I continue let me just confirm that this idea is femslash. If you have any problems with this idea then you're welcome to disregard it, although I do hope that you'll still have Hasky in this since she's another awesome character.

Finally here's my last suggestion. combining Dragon Ball GT with Dragon Ball Super somehow. Now I'm not ashamed to admit that GT has always had a soft spot for me. I know a lot of people give it shit. But I always liked it. It introduced Pan who was hot. And Baby, who I think is one of the most underrated villains of the series.

Signed

Malachite - Jasper, Lapis lazuli - and Peridot
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