|Reviews for The Consequence of Miracles|
| Mernzi chapter 19 . 2/19
This story was rec'd over on Perusing The Shelves and i am thankful that i was logged on and saw this rec.
Your story is absolutely, positively, heartbreaking. It was real and honest and i am so glad you didnt give E & B a rainbow ending. They have so many obstacles to overcome and im happy to let them live their lives and work it out on their own. I dont want to invade their personal space anymore because their road is long and its gonna take a helluva lot of work to get there, but, im positive they will - eventually.
Thank you for your words and i hope you have continued success in your Orig Fic adventures.
| reesessweetie chapter 19 . 2/15
such a good story. it was so real. i love the way you write. it makes me so sad to think of what edward had to go through. it just weighs down on me. but then you show me his strength and i'm just so proud of him, to have survived that.
| EmmettRose chapter 19 . 2/9
Please do a sequel :)
| i.luv.twilight2 chapter 19 . 2/4
I am from the St. Louis area and as I read this story I couldn't help but think of Shawn Hornbeck and cry. He too was a lucky one to return after a nightmare with innocence lost. Beautifully written but heartbreakingly sad.
| Stranger chapter 19 . 1/28
you gotta talent, love, and I honestly cant believe that its the end already
| LalaMunchkin chapter 19 . 1/28
I just discovered this one, and all I can say is that you're a great writer. You made me laugh, you made me cry, you made me sigh, you made me gasp and you made me smile. And also, this was kind of something I was looking for, something I haven't read before. Which means your story made an even bigger impact on me. You write beautifully. Keep doing what you're doing. Thank You!
Psst! I'm going to check out your novel now ;-)
| Sally-anna Fanfic chapter 19 . 1/23
Wow. It was after one in the morning when I finally finished your story, I just couldn't stop reading it.
What an emotional, powerful, heartbreaking, hopeful story. Your words drew me in and I felt like I was part of the story and living their pain.
Its all there, the usual, first loves, love that never dies, heartbreak and the getting back together BUT this is so much much more than your typical ff love story. I know a lot of people will be screaming for an epilogue, but I think this was a perfect ending, they were on the right track and I think at this piont, that's all they can ask for. Giving them the 2.4 kids a dog an a house with the white picket fence, would in my opinion, turn it in to all the other stories on ff, and as I've already said, this is so much more than that.
Thank you for a truly remarkable story and thank you Pa Trizia for the rec xxx
| SnideRide chapter 19 . 1/22
So tragic yet a beautiful ending!
| Sally-anna Fanfic chapter 15 . 1/22
Oh god, this chapter just ... So heartbreaking
| Sally-anna Fanfic chapter 9 . 1/22
I feel like I should be celebrating that he's back, but, I feel like the nightmare is just about to begin !
| Sally-anna Fanfic chapter 7 . 1/22
Bellas talk on Edwards bench was just heartbreaking x
| Sally-anna Fanfic chapter 6 . 1/22
Its easy for people on the outside to move on from a loss, but when it affects you directly, every step to moving on feels like you're betraying them. Life does go on, but not without heartache, and you captured that brilliantly x
| Sally-anna Fanfic chapter 3 . 1/22
Wow, Im loving this story so far.
Your words make me feel like Im living this with them, my heart is breaking for Bella.
As a mum, I understand Esmes reluctance to let go and my heart goes out to Charlie.
Ive read the warnings, so Im a little worried where the story is going, but Im glad its completed.
| Pa Trizia 88 chapter 19 . 1/19
I literally spent my night reading this. I simply couldn't find it in me to stop. Your writing is just so brilliantly philosophical and captivating. Your creating of a world full of horror and grief and still managing to put that sliver of hope on the horizon for us to be able to continue to read something as hard this story. The tough thing being the total identification with their world of emotions through your words. Outstanding.
After I had only read a couple of paragraphs during the WIP phase, I knew I had to wait until completed, inspite of your frequent updates. I would've not been able to bear the angst without the choice of reading until I can no more. Or maybe , given the appearant quality of your writing was igniting a giddy anticipation on the competion of it that made the wait until reading it finally resemble some sort of foreplay .. which until today ( or more like last night) I kept going and finally had to give in .. and rewarded I was. Thank you for that. Somebody said, your really are Jandco. So , if that is true, I am not surprised by my adoration for your talent. Have I always been an admirer of your work. I downloaded your first publication already , to be able to devour at a later date. Congratulations on that, to you and your sister ( I believe?) . Will follow your writing closely. xoxoxox thanks for still writing ffn for us ..you can change your name as often as you want to ;)
| FeelingUntouched chapter 19 . 1/8
I don't even know where to start this review... just... wow?
The summary got me thinking due to the drinking and driving at the start that they would get into an accident, someone would die and some would be injured and acutally in a wheelchair that was mentioned. So I did not feel very sympathetic at the beginning but quite on edge for the car crash to happen and then - nothing.
But then there it was. Creeping up on me from behind and getting me down with every chapter. I started to read this yesterday and truth to be told I sat in front of my laptop crying throughout half of the story. Especially chapters 13 to 17 had me in tears and sobbing. Like I said I did not feel very good or connected with the characters in the beginning. But by the time Edward and Bella were in her room and talking like that I totally got it and them. Their youth and love and the beauty of it all and I felt quite in love myself - with them as a couple and your way of writing them.
And then this horrible, terrible thing happens to them and I could not believe how much it (a fanfiction no less! this art astounds me again and again, thanks you so much for sharing this) got me down and made me feel sad and terrible all evening long and made me want to crawl into bed with my head on my boyfriends shoulder (long distance relationship, so none of that for me when spontaniously feeling really down - yeah, you see I had a terrible evening due to your story)...
And I have to thank you soo much for it.
I love this story. I just know that I am going to come back to this, while going through my favorite stories list, maybe in a few month, maybe in two years and re-read the story and react just as emotional to this like I did yesterday and today.
I actually believe, due to the beginning of the story and your ANs that you are an incredibly fun person to be around (the rumour/Robert Pattinson thing nearly made me fall of from my chair, I was laughing so hard!) and that makes you writing this incredibly sad. devastating but also hopefull and very very beautiful story even more awesome.
So really, thank you so much for sharing this story with us/me.
I am amazed and will be again by this story, I am quite sure of it.