Holy crap, how are you able to make me feel this like it's actually happening to me? You are brilliant. Beautifully written, wonderful and hopeful and heartbreaking all rolled into one amazing story. This should be a movie.

wow.

Holy shit, this whole story is really hard to read. More than once I thought I couldn't read further. It's a heavy topic. I cried and cried and cried...I have a lot of respect regarding Edward and Bella, they cope this terrible incident so great. To sum up: WOW!

Wow! Just read this story through, I couldn't stop. Beautifully written, great characters and the scenes you wrote really stuck with me. I love that you didn't make E and B the perfect couple, they had downfalls and had to work for each other, and I think that's important. I love how you portrayed Bella in your story as well, how strong she is, because I feel she's too often a really weak character that expects Edward to swoop in and save her all the time and never considers Edward may have weaknesses and insecurities too. The characters seemed so real and the story had a really good build and a great ending that was not overly sappy. Loved it! Thank you for putting this out there for us to read. Keep writing like you do!

I really wish that you would write more. The way you write is so easy to read and comprehend. Real life events that happen every second made more real in this story where readers can become so immersed in the story is amazing. As horrifying as the subject matter is, the way that you depict and set out how the events take place is extraordinary. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope to be able to read more from you in the future whether through fanfiction or your own pieces of work.

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It's 2:35 am. I've been bawling through this whole thing and I know I'm going to look like a whack job tomorrow at work. I can't put this story down though.

Wow. I really enjoyed reading this story.

Every chapter was amazing. This whole story, start to finish was amazing. Your Edward was amazing.

Hello. Excellent story here! I never read one with this type of plot before. I thought it was genius and very well-written. Kudos to you! Thanks for entertaining me. Suzan Noerr

Bella is a little too damn pushy.

She can't just say she understands or I hurt too, she doesn't understand and she damn sure wasn't hurting like he was. She's being pushy. Putting unnecessary pressure on him.

I know you're trying to write Bella as some strong pressence but in all fairness, she's just being incredibly pushy with a victim, don't see how Edward isn't triggered cause from we know, vic and aro were pushy too.

I saw the subject matter and didn't want to read this. Someone insisted I read this right now. I'm so glad they did. You know why I'd be cautious to take on this subject matter: too often I have read stories that quickly devolve into quasi-pity-meets-salascious that makes me want to burn my laptop with frustration and distaste.
This story had the opposite effect: this is the story I always wanted to read. Focusing on what is truly important: what happens in the aftermath made this story compelling and heartfelt. I stayed up late reading this, and fanfic hasn't made me do that in a long time. The dialogue, the characters, the dilemmas, all made this truly one of the best of the best. It was brilliant: kudos.
And good luck with your publishing. Anyone willing to take such risks and respect the reader/topic deserves good things their way.

It's 3.30am in the UK and I have just finished your story after reading non-stop all evening. I don't think I've ever cried so much over a fanfiction, tears of sadness, frustration and at times shock. I've never read a story like this before but I "enjoyed" every page of it, if that's the correct word when talking about a subject matter as dark as this. I look forward to reading anything you publish.

There have been two or three stories I've read here that I was convinced were written by a current published author. Maybe writing something new for them, or taking a break from the expectations and drama of a contract. I would bet money on this story only. Maybe I'm wrong. Thank you. Despite the horror and sadness of the topic, I loved every single word.

This story is breaking my heart. I want to stop reading but can't. One thing - you are an amazing writer, and I hope publishers are chasing you down.

This was amazing.